Khasm13 : close your eyes....

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    close your eyes
    and imagine walking with me
    through paths of plush ample greenery
    with a starlit night being our scenery
    us holding hands tight as a wedding band
    thas what you mean to me
    and if you are tired...lean on me
    it's ok...

    close your eyes
    and imagine swiming in warm rivers
    bodies weaving in and out as souls shiver
    under the sheer delight of our earthly plight
    our buoyancy is the fight this love delivers
    close your eyes...and remember
    me being there through thick and thin
    and always holding you tender...
    you've blessed me with your heart
    and i promise to take extreme care of it....then return it to the sender
    .......
    close your eyes
    and when they open
    i will be here....
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dropping it cause it's hot

    Very Nice Khasm

    :hot: Imagery abounds in this piece. :hot:

    Flowing mental pictures
    Imagination has to move to center
    and this is standard proof dreams
    come true in the arms of someone special.

    Very nice drop bro.
     
  3. Muse

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    :bawling: I want that!!!
    this was beautiful.

    -Muse
     
  4. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a nice mellow piece.........i especially liked the part that when I open my eyes you will still be here... dis was tyte.
     
  5. angelicsage

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    ok...ok...if I can only gather my composure...I will speak...
    Khasm, Khasm, Khasm....
    this one caught me off guard...
    Show us how it's done poet...show us how it's done...
    Maaaan, this flowed like a Nile river from the depths of the soul...
    You consistently...EXCEED MY EXPECTATIONS...
    Oh...let's just forget the words...*where's my alter*...

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    All Hail to King Khasm...


    ooooooooooooooo
     
  6. triniti424

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    This was beautiful brotha Khasm...

    open your eyes
    and come and be with me
    alongside the rivers of our ancestry
    moonlight paths of blessed history
    being made with every step we make
    the pages being written with every breath we take
    together…
    if not forever…
    for now…
    let us live in the pleasant blessings of “now”

    open your eyes
    and see with me the hand of creation
    forming our ever so delicate relation
    souls collide….
    and fears subside…
    and joy has truly… arrived…
    and when you are weak…
    allow your troops to replenish within my walls
    with every unspoken word of emotion we speak
    allow your soul to find rest in our minds “unison”
    the blak blessed “ONE”

    open your eyes and see…
    that when you close them…I will still be with thee
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    Forgive me brotha :blush:
    this was too lovely to NOT chime in smh
    I had to indulge smh The words of brotha Khasm...amazing
    whoever your muse is my brotha...shes blessed to have you in her life...truly
    May your Love be blessed by our ancestors with the power that can only be nubian...

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    My eyes are gently closing...
    guide me, wherever you chosen...

    To follow your lead...I am compelled
    I gently ask, that you guide me well

    And once the starlit fall our way
    let's calmly...drop to our knees and pray...

    I'll count my blessings, for finding you
    in your heart, shines a :love: that's true

    Thanks for being the "pole"..when I get tired and weak
    for, with you dear Khasm...is all that I reap

    I'm closing my eys, tight to the beam....
    *and pray that*
    When I open them...it's not :nono: a dream​

    I must say, this is quite different from what I'm use too...comming from you. Whoever she is, she's a very, very lucky lady to have you in her life.
    I trully enjoyed reading this piece, even tho I had to look twice to make sure it was you...thanks for sharing a part of you.
     
  8. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Khasm...

    that piece is tight, bruh. Now that's the way a Brotha steps to a Sista...dang gone it. Man-up, Black Man...Man-up.

    :thanks: for showing the Bruhs how to Man-up when stepping to a Sista...Dapz.

    :toast:

    Trinit: Beautiful response from a Black Woman's perspective. :bowdown:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

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    tight !!!
    breaking us down
    smooth............. :D
    loving the flow as always...
    laid back i see
    and loving trin's flow in....
    i likes i likes....lol

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man the way u express this upon a sista will melt anything
    love this flow it's a masterpiece of perfection brutha
    do ya thang i'm listening
     
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