Black Poetry : Close your eyes

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Close your eyes…
    Feel the breeze of the essence
    Alive and showing
    True colors
    Bold and true
    Inside the rainbow
    Pulling us together in heaven’s rays
    Close your eyes…
    Sense the greatness
    As the purple ivy takes hold
    Gold and silver starz float above
    Let the power take you in.
    Search your soul….
    Yearn the vibe
    Kissing with sweet temptation
    Illusions of mystery for the magic plays
    As angels sing.. Within sight
    Transparent luxuries of you and I
    Enhance as two hearts take hold
    Close your eyes…
    Drifting off to a land of wonder
    In a twisted sweet romance…
    Flowers begin to bloom
    As a rose stand..Vibrant to its glow…
    Close your eyes….
    Listen to the sweet melody of
    You and I
    Feeling the depth of it all…
    As it yells in a whisper of a hush
    SHhhhhhh.....
    Close your eyes


    (c) 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was awesome took me back to one of my post
    very well done and felt
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i remember your piece its one of my favorite:)
    thank you for the love on dis..glad ya feeling it
    i am too!!!..:kiss:
     
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    Much can be seen and felt with eyes closed. Nice flow.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watz for the read
     
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    Nice drop sista, always a pleasure to read
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you theone..for the love on dis
    Angel
     
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    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
    Love that thang you do!

    Keep on droping them sis!
     
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    As I closed my eyes the breadth you occured to me

    You span the ages, immortal goddess.
     
  10. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like a chinese baby...............loved it:lol: :wink: unfortunately I can only close one:wave:
     
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