Quiet Poetry Lounge : CLOSE ya EYEz

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jun 15, 2003.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Lay upon me
    and
    close ya eyez

    feel my warmth
    of love i give
    when u
    close ya eyez

    allow the darkness
    show u my light
    and make u feel alright
    let the depth
    of my moment of tyme
    shine through
    ya eyez

    just close ya eyez
    my beloved one
    i am ya comfort
    i am ya protector
    i am ya mystery
    of reasons

    let me be within
    when u vision
    everytyme
    u
    close ya eyez :look:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Windy ain't the city without your nitty gritty!

    Flow-on...
    Blow long...
    We love your song-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    1poet the tunes filled da air
    thankz bruh
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm closing my eyes...

    I like this piece very beautiful and sincere thanks for blessing us with another one of your flows :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome sistah serenti...
     
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    When I close my eyes
    I can feel the warmth of your breath
    As I hold my pillow close to me
    I sense the rhapsody of your wrath
    as I reach through the air
    to caress your intangible face
    my heart dances at an incredible pace
    when I close my eyes
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when u close ya eyez
    and feel da depth of
    GOD given love in da
    breeze of my wrath
    as tyme pass through
    da soul and allow da
    spirit to be moved in
    da comfort of my beings
    then keep them close
    let the eyez of sparkling
    darkness be da vision
    of what and how u want
    it all to be as so forth
    it shall .................
    Thank u sistah Queen purplemoons
     
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    RICH...feeling your thoughts here....

    when we are the only one our lover "sees" when they close their eyes....now, THAT is the highest human praise anyone can give...or receive.

    enjoyed this very much! thank you for sharing.

    alyce
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' yes Alyce inside one's love is through da eyez
    Thank u sistah A.
     
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    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    I know how it is, to close my eyes and be overtaken by only one vision; one face. Heart warming flow, RICH, my brotha.

    Thank you

    Bert
     
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