Black Poetry : Close to Comfort

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Dec 9, 2010.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    howard :

    are we in Arkansas yet?

    eve :

    we just passed through Little Rock

    [Howard yawns]

    turns on the radio

    howard :

    you in the mood for a little rock?

    eve :

    sure

    hand me that Pepsi would you?

    howard :

    that dude you walked away from must still be a little rocked

    eve :

    i know

    Eve thinks back

    hey guys watch this trick

    while adjusting her skateboard

    howard and her friends :

    Eve watch out for those little rocks!!!!!

    eve :

    huh?

    Eve turns around as her skateboard crashes into the rocks

    catapulting her through the air

    peter :

    gotcha

    lucky for you i was swinging through the neighborhood

    eve :

    Spiderman?


    he was such a nice guy

    i really enjoyed the time we spent swinging through the neighborhoods

    but a girl like me and a guy like that ……

    howard :

    he got to you a little didn’t he

    [Eve nods]






    love,

    eve & howard
     
  2. skuderjaymes

    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    nicely done.. love the word play.. my 12 year-old loves your work too.

    Peace.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'yeah awesomely done bruh !
     
  4. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $$rich$$

    thanks skuderjaymes
     
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