Black Poetry : Climactic Excursion

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  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It seems as if U stepped elegantly from my dreams.
    U are the physical embodiment of my deepest fantasies.
    Just 2 have your eyes meet mine makes my heart flutter.
    My arms yearn 2 embrace U in a way they've never held another.

    I never knew it was possible 4 me 2 feel this way.
    Wanting 2 spend a lifetime looking at your lovely face.
    2 kiss your neck, feeling your soft skin
    on my lips would be paradise.
    2 hear your sweet voice passionately calling
    my name would be so nice.
    Just let me love U.

    U are the reason I was made.
    U are my inspiration 4 taking my 1st breath of the day.
    I see your face the moment I close my eyes,
    including when I blink.
    Am I infatuated?
    Nah...I just want U that much.
    2 be enveloped in the warmth of your arms,
    feeling total bliss from the slightest touch.

    When I rise in the morning, I want U 2 be my 1st sight,
    & my last when the world is engulfed in the darkness of night.
    Take my hand & let me be your love's guide.
    I'll take U 2 the outermost reaches of sexuality
    & make your eroticism peak & climb.
    I want 2 deep sea dive in your ocean of passion,
    searching 2 hidden treasures.
    Slowly exploring the cave traversed by few
    2 find its forbidden pleasures.

    Partaking of the sweet nectar the flower growing there yields.
    Unleashing the excitement its soft petals keep concealed.
    Until you've achieved climax.
    Then, gradually I'd bring U back 2 where we were beforeplay.
    Holding U close as the rapid gasps return 2 breathing normally.
    Then we'd go back another way.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh...i likes very well
    signs of love...great write
    I want U 2 be my 1st sight....feelin this
    much love:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was beautiful and i love the way it was pose'd
    tyte scribe poet
     
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    Cannot help but feel a reaction
    From your Climactic Excursion
    The exchange of warmth
    From dusk to dawn
    That tranquil rhythm
    Intimate feeling
    Lovely indeed. Wonderful poet
    Peace
     
  5. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you to all.

    I'm trying to step away from the negative in life, because after all, there is also love.

    Peace.
     
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    keep it come'n holmes...
    this was tyte
    like spandex on my ex :lol:
    peace
    khasm
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin the romance! flow on
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes indeed this should be love...so beautiful my brotha...so beautiful.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very beautiful piece!

    Hands clapping and finger's snapping! To this sweet love poem you have scribed, loving this romantic vibe....

    Blessings On Your house!
     
  10. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for feeling.

    Just trying a little something different for me.