Quiet Poetry Lounge : Click

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Nov 10, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Click...

    Turn on the lights.
    I don`t want to hide in the shadows of your thoughts.

    Mystery is a glamorous illusion.

    Turn on the lights.
    I want to see you for who you are, naked and transparent.
    Not who I want you to be, surrounded amongst luxuries of beauty.

    I want to know what makes you smile,
    What moves your very soul,
    What touches your heart,
    The conversations or stimulation`s that arouse your great intellect.

    Who are you? And what does it take to know the essence of you?

    Turn on the lights,
    And let me see you.
    Are you staring back at me?

    Can you look beyond the sexuality, the physicality?
    I am as real as imperfection.
    Can we---Together---make what is wrong---Right?

    Turn on the lights.<center>

    Your beauty glows from the depth of my soul.
    Illuminating your smile,
    Adding a sensuality to the dip in your walk,
    Invigorating the strength that comes from within.

    Do you see the intelligence and optimism in my eyes?

    Turn on the lights.

    I open my self and my soul.
    Can you feel the passion that compels us to live each moment?

    Live this moment with me.

    Turn on the lights.

    Click...

    Copyright 2001 by Caramelpython
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice touch...i wont added my part...
    enjoyed this like the first time i read it...:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
    click.
    dem lights on flow head
     
  4. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know I had to stop by and give you your props...You doing your thang, keep it coming!
     
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    this flows so nice!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love the way you wrote this. Will someone love me when they see the real me? Deep.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so pretty and so deep. really enjoy your stuff.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh this is a wonderful flow
    Click
    liking this
    Peace
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love and...... don't worry I will be here waiting on Ya'll like motel 6 I'll leave the lights on! LOL
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

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    click...you of it...welcome
    you are a good poet so flow on my brother
     
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