Black Poetry : Cleopatra's Nut

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CLEOPATRA’S NUT

    I Thutmose take Cleopatra III my Bride
    I pierced Julius, your lover, in his side
    My Queens love I shall not divide
    Why?
    My veins overflow with Egyptian pride

    The Memory of my warfare is vivid
    Some say there are roots with King David
    Watch out now cuz I’m known to Thump
    If I were a tree then David is the Stump

    In my palace Cleopatra walks in Nude skin
    She’s like Beth-Sheba filled with carnal sin
    Suppliants are prostrated for the battles I win
    My adversary’s swords I just wore thin

    My Queen everyone wants to Bed
    She’s in the power of my hands she weds
    Thousands of arrows you will have to shed
    Put no thoughts of battle cuz I will tear U to Shreds

    All Plans, Plots leaves you dead on your Butts
    Cleopatra’s my Fu.ck to lay multitude Nuts
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was nice like how u mastered this one
     
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    I liked the way you used those Nubian lovers in your spin on this tale. I wasn't expecting it to end the way it did, although I was wondering if you would incorporate the title into the piece, which you ultimately did. I enjoyed this.
     
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    Thanks for sharing this piece poet.
     
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    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wooooo..you got deep and nice with this...liked it @@@@@@@@@ (applause), snap snap
     
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    This singsong nut done bust itself in ecstacy!
     
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    this is some unique write i really enjoyed this uhhhhhmm spread so flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    GREAT FLOW. THIS POEM IS JUST NOTHING BUT TALENT I MEAN I JUST WANT TO KEEP READING IT OVER AND OVER. THANKS FOR SHARING CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.
     
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    Amen!! .
     
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    dam
    I like this one poet
    You really had me in this one
    Red Hot poet smockin
     
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