Black Poetry : Clearing My System

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jun 28, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    drip
    drop
    drip
    let it fall
    let it slip
    i cant hold it in anymore
    no tissue
    let it smear
    let it out
    let it clear
    all my thoughts
    let it take form
    let it release
    no hiding
    let it ease
    these emotions in my heart

    drop
    drip
    drop
    keep going
    don’t stop
    let it flow
    let it all go
    no holding in
    no refraining
    show the pain
    show the frustration
    make them see it
    they don’t understand
    i am only human
    don’t give up cuz i can
    show the emptiness
    show the broken heart
    let it open me
    let it rip me a part
    show the anger
    show the aggression
    let it take over me
    so i can….

    Hit the ground
    Pound my fist
    Show them im mad
    Prove that im pist
    Scream
    Yell
    Keep going
    Until they can really tell
    Tell them my thoughts
    Tell them my opinion
    Make them see this aint a joke
    Keep screamin
    Until I nearly choke
    Throw sumthin
    Break some glass
    Release the tension
    For the future, present, and the past
    Let it come down
    Drown in the puddles
    ****!!

    Drip
    Drop
    Drip
    Its pouring
    This is it…
    Let me live
    Admire me, hate me
    Mockin me, rate me
    I am me
    You are you
    Its final
    Me: I know that’s hard to do
    I cant help who I am
    You cant help who u are
    I just gotta let it out yall
    Drip
    Drop
    Drip
    Its flowin
    Can’t control it
    Ima show em
    Ima prove it

    I’m gonna keep crying until it clears my system.
     
  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi,

    I like this!!

    This is a wonderful piece!!

    Fantastic read!!

    :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u sierra
     
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    Loved your flow here, sometimes you just gotta let it all out, yes, it starts out as a drip, drop but the force behind will only begin to push more. Felt u on this one! truly...
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks angelicsage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    drip drop !
    now i know
    love dis flow
    let it all go u know
    tyte
     
  7. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, that's nice right there! Syncopated, like words marching, dopeness...
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol thank u $$Rich$$ and liquyd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome chile....
     
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    Now this was so filled with emotions
    and conveyed so well
    we know you ain' t no joke
    but a poet with a gift
    keep doin' the thang, Poeticly
    Peace to ya
     
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