Black Poetry : Clearing my Head

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How you gonna, arraign a 16 year old as an adult.
    Cause he killed a policeman.
    Law does what it wants to do of course.

    I don’t understand a mother******* word you are saying.
    I mean all of it.
    This is serious.
    I mean it.
    I am not playing.

    Time to take this thing to task.
    Take things serious.
    Things will run over your ***.
    This is war for my sanity.
    So I am armed to the teeth.

    Know the man in me.
    No time for crying.
    That mother****** is dead.

    Take off the censor filter.
    Get this thought off my head.

    You know she sat there.
    Letting me buy her drinks.
    Knowing as soon as she could
    come up with an excuse.

    She would dump me in the brink.
    Didn’t have the nerve to
    woman up to her abuse.

    To use me for a free drink, smiling.
    I look back her whole demeanor.
    It stinks.

    Writing in what they call
    fragmented terms and words.
    Hell let me express myself.
    Let me get out my words.
    Take the filter off this thing.

    Let me spread.
    Clear my head.
    Start the New Year out.
    As they say do the right thing!
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    man

    get yours

    let it all out

    nobody got hurt

    you're not going to jail (i hope lol)

    and yes it's a new year

    a new cycle

    another go round

    one year from now we will see

    bring in the 2008 right

    clear it out

    clean it up

    and use the mulligan

    if necessary

    peace poet
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aren't you glad you're a poet, Hodee? To be able to creatively flow what ails you onto paper, such a release. Keep flowing brother, and we'll keep reading and relating to it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now , expressing da head to clear da thoughts
     
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