Black Poetry : Clear Visions

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  1. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Clear Visions

    As time goes on and the breeze drys my brow, my visions are clear.
    Clear is the vision of love, clear is the vision of hate, clear is the vision of wanting the circle of love to return to hate.
    Clearly i see the days of tommorow kissing my mind with gentle fury, turning the purest of my love into clear hate.
    As the breeze leaves my brow to descend through the trees to lay its caress against its warm leaves, i sigh of love.
    I sigh of hate.
    I sigh of the torment of loves fury, strong and defiant weakening to the strengh of hates cold, clean plans.
    Plans for my future hate says to me will make me strong will make me swim in its desire, will protect me against the waves that love has instore for me, vunerable and open hate says will claim me, will destroy me, join me hate says, see the vision?
    See it clearly i am here to protect you, to encircle you in my fold,love you say, will leave you naked, i will clothe you in my eternal dress and no one will be able to hurt you, love you say.
    love you got something to say, See the vision of my love, its clear.
    You can never be clothed in hate aslong as you no how to love.
    The vision is clear my love.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome! Clarity is always desirable. I like your poem, keep scribing-

    1poetsought ~
     
  3. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You very much,
    I discovered this site today and i enthralled.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!

    welcome to destee's poetic playground
    welcome to da house of love & respect
    welcome upon our family relax and flow
    coz i see da clear vision u scribe as u vibe
    welcome !!!:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :star:
     
  5. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so honored to have so many kindred spirts share their thought s with me.
    I am still trying to figure out how to pick a icon, (smile)
    I look forward to the flow and stream that will envelop us all in the train of thought.

    Stylewriter
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let me see if i can help
    most welcome happy to have u upon us
    as we share in growth together ..........
     
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    I see clearly that this vibe is hot.
     
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    wonderful poem poet WELCOME WELCOME and WELCOME again lol :) peace and blessins and keep flowin and p.s. I like your name ;) and again beautiful poem
     
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    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are exacting

    what a glimpse of pleasure i am having, exacting and feeling energy flow from invisible being real to me in the inhabitance of time.

    thank you for your gift
     
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