Black Poetry : CLEANSING RAIN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Apr 29, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SOMETIMES
    YOU NEED
    TO JUST
    LET GO.
    TO LET
    ALL OF THE
    PAIN AND
    THE ANQUISH
    FLOW FROMYOU
    AND WASH AWAY THE
    SORROW AND HURT.
    IT FEELS GOOD TO
    BE FREE OF HEARTACHE
    AND DISMAY.
    SOME TIMES CRYING IS LIKE
    A
    CLEANSING RAIN.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thatgirl74

    That is so very true. If you don't believe it, then you haven't been deeply hurt...emotionally.

    You get a :grouphug: on this one.

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this and totaly agree tears like fresh water to me and I'm floatin on a stream in a dream :book:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe this was sweet u go gurl !!!!!!!
     
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    this be true
    like the way you laid this
    Peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing like a good cry, definitely cleanses the soul, truthful write.
     
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    i agree sometimes you need to let those tears flow in order to feel cleansed. i feel you on this
     
  8. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the words of encouragement.
    I am glad you are feeling this piece.
     
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    Im touched, i dig this, nice piece.
     
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    Like I always say let it rain on me and wash away my thoughts.
     
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