Black Poetry : CLASSICAL STORM

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Oh' what a night of sensual storm
    laying close in bed cuddlely & warm

    listening to da classical tunes
    caressin my mind from da room

    for nearly six long hours
    crashin , bangin heavy rain

    :rain::rain::rain::rain::rain::rain:
    tryin to enter , callin my name
    then all night long making a claim

    O' what a night of sensual storm
    whispering winds singing da song

    each rain drop like a musical note
    as thunder rumble shaking my bed

    what a feeling my body had
    yet i laid still wondering in my head

    Of this classical storm
    i mentally wedd

    After da rain at day break
    it wasn't all as bad
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are leaving me here with my mouth open on this one...wow. My goodness Rich, I'll be back later to speak to this one....
    And now that I've returned to this, what an experience it must be to have another's essence come upon them, and the peace that's left in it's wake. Wonderfully posed.
     
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    $$RICH$$:
    This Classical Storm was music to my ears.
    Lovely....


    Much Luv
     
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    river Watch Her Flow MEMBER

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    There's a woman in there somewhere. I just know it.
     
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    Thankz watz u know how them quiet storms are ......

    4EVERLUV thankz a million u know how it is when it rain

    hey River thankz for the visit , u know it's one i just didn't bring her out .....lol
     
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