Khasm13 : clash of the demi-gods...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    poets stay tuned to this thread cause it will comprise of 13 poems dealing with the 7 deadly sins(demi-gods) doing battle against each other for sole dominance of the human soul.hope you enjoy
    peace
    khasm
     
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    vanity...

    pride cometh before the fall
    but still this demi-god stands tall
    i am the demi-god from which all others get their call
    and my increasing power will never stall
    as long as one man believes he's better than the other
    and as long as one man ignores a cry of help from his brother
    just cause he has more important things to do
    hubris is alive and well
    taught everyday in school
    i am the demi-god that controls all men that wish to rule
    i am the demi-god that wishes to possess all men and women
    like jewels
    i am the demi-god that makes you look like a fool
    cause you do not have the same wisdom as i do
    whenever you tumble you can bet your bottom dollar
    that i will be there to remind you
    of your ignorance and bind you
    i am blind to other demi-gods that are less than me
    and when i grab ahold of your soul
    i will never set it free
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed pt.2 please
    liking it already
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Interesting poetic endeavor, K!
    droppin knowledge too!
    Do the thang!
     
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    envy

    i am the demi-god that they call a hater
    compare to me no other demi-god is greater
    i'm the one who makes men jealous
    of the size of other mens d!ck
    and i'm the one who make women jealous
    of other womens @ss and t!ts
    my influence on the human psyche
    causes insecure people to have fits
    i reduce the poor into
    kibble and bits
    making you look at your neighbors car
    that has tints
    making you look at your neighbors wife
    with the thick lips and wide hips
    making you wish you had the same amount of chips
    as the next man
    my master plot is grand
    im best with black folks
    cause their feeble minds can't understand
    that material wealth means nothing
    in the bigger scheme
    that's why i inject thoughts of riches
    in their dreams
    making them hate the man that has more
    my power is so strong
    i'll pimp your soul like a whore
    then take you on hell's tour
     
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    gluttony

    i am the big daddy of all demi-gods
    overindulgence is my card
    once i got a hold of you
    i'll turn your body into mostly lard
    i got people in america letting down their guard
    obesity is only one of my decencies
    cause every demi-god in excess is me
    i ruin druken men lives masterfully
    and with glee
    i make crack heads smoke up their friends
    like a chimneys
    hee hee hee
    the construction of my destruction
    is crafted so well that mostly no one
    ever flees
    my poison people drink up like the seas
    and oceans
    worshiping me has become plain to see
    that's why there is no commotion
    when i step in tha place
    i got souls on lock
    of every race
    reconize my strength
    and get that confused look off your face
    cause you know you want another taste
     
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    wow.........thats all i can say........i looked forward to the rest...
     
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    man.........khas you are doin it man!!!! Im lookin forward to the next ones also.....
     
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    :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
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    Khasm, you are phenomenal...and your work a phenomenon - a remarkable development. You've got mad skills - I can't wait to read more!
     
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