Black Poetry : ...Claim Me...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    do you really claim me?, I mean really claim me?
    when you wanna shout out that i'm your only baby
    when no other lady could come between our mating
    when you could be satisfied with me, your only lady

    do you really claim me?, I mean really claim me?
    if a woman asked your status Mister, who would I be?
    Would you think of my esscence oh so very briefly?
    or would you say that you are forever mine and with me?

    yeah you say all the right things needed to keep me
    but if you got tired me me would you be cheating?
    or have you already pretended you want to keep me?
    knowing good and well you're tired of repeating

    do you really claim me?, I mean really claim me?
    or do you just like to come through and kiss and lay me?
    f#ck me til the wee hours of a new morning
    then act like you can't pick up a telephone and call me

    showing me off to your friends ain't claiming
    taking me to the out is, but it ain't, cuz you see?
    i want the whole world to know the man I need to see
    and to me thats the way you have to claim me

    yeah i will admit i like how you put it on me
    but after awhile if you dont claim me i'll be cheating
    dont mean to alarm you in any way baby
    but i know quite a few fellas who'd like to claim me....
     
  2. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've said a mouthful! I don't think he should claim you though. What he needs to do is cherish you.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats very true....
     
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    I like the wy you said this
    But I must agree he should cherish you as well
    Nice flow again poet
     
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    You spoke the truth here, if a person has worth then you are more than happy to claim them. Right on point poet. Nice to be reading something new from you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loving the essence running from this
    and surely he should behold in you
    to cherish............well said & done sis.
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jump: :jump: :jump: SHE'S BACK... :jump: :jump: :jump:

    Thought maybe you left while I was gone. :hi: Good to read you again. :hi: Can't wait to hear more. This was well written and heartfelt. Missed you much sis!
     
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