Black Poetry : Circumspect Farewell

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  1. kymkymusa

    kymkymusa Member MEMBER

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    I watched & waited
    to see the end come
    Knowing it was coming
    but not wanting it done.

    I watched & waited
    Aware that she was there
    Hoping he'd see
    How much it hurt & care.

    I watched & waited
    Holding him close to my heart
    Waiting for our
    New life to start.

    I watched & waited
    Wondering if he knew
    How much I loved him
    And what I was going through.

    I watched & waited
    Thinking of his good
    Wanting him to do
    As he knew he should.

    I watched & waited
    Hoping he'd know I know
    So if love was important
    She would go.

    I watched & waited
    To hear him say
    He no longer
    Wanted me to stay.

    I watched until...
    I saw despite loving him so
    I'd have to
    Let him go.

    I waited until...
    I waited in vain
    Realizing I couldn't
    continue the same.

    Patience learns much
    that it will tell
    Subsequently, I write this
    Circumspect Farewell.
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME... I'll watch and wait for your next poem.

    REMEMBER.... Love somebody and someone will love you back.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true dat
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless u some love

    watching and waiting for the next drop of poetic spray
    very nice write continue to flow and share love upon ya
    new family & home
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is expertly laid out! Lookin forward to readin more from ya. Welcome!
     
  5. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME TO DESTEE... you certainly brought that poem in, calmly, yet so true, sometimes we hold on to things we know that we eventually have to let go.

    loved it

    keep the flow goin

    I hope to hear more of you.
     
  6. Beautiful18

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    Sometimes we do need to let go, but sometimes we can't or sometimes its just to hard cause when the love is there you can't take it away. I've done alot of my watch and waiting escapades and what I've learned from them is to stop watching and waiting, they know where they should be no need to watch and wait they'll find their way back if its meant (cliche but its true).
     
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