Black Poetry : CIRCLING TYME

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Impassing through silence of uncertain
    where da hours past beyond infinite in
    frozen tyme on a instant fade
    my heart's pain vents into da circle of
    endlessly maze of life's countlessly

    I reach out yet no one to touch
    i call out only for no one to answer
    i cry out in crystal tears dat's not felt
    my pain seem to go untamed or cared for
    as i whisper from heart & soul today

    Asking you stay would be invited guess
    yet i seek my safety and comfort that looms
    on the open flame where one may fleet me
    as i cross the loneliness spiraling
    i lose myself deeper in this moment of tyme

    My body wasn't a giver but a taker
    to be loved and cherished
    still there's a void where silence divide us
    our space invaded by doubt and unseen
    but my love lingers deeper and stronger

    I must be careful how i love and who i love
    yet i long to hear yo voice once again
    and feel the warmth of ya exsistance holding
    me under the hope of starz above as the
    moon clash in clouds and the rumble of my
    black heart that love's continue to call & feel
    you are food to my soul and the tea to my morrow
    !
     
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    to richy rich$$$$$$.....

    you say Im food for the soul and tea for tomorrow
    then tell me why we must wallow in sorrow

    wasnt i there
    when nobody cared
    and shared
    i dared

    others to look upon in disqust
    who was there to raise the roof or made a fuss

    so tired of us going back and forth
    for what its worth

    you the sun that shines it light on me
    i wanna thankyou for letting me be

    what i wanted was to be next to you
    baby i dont care who knows i'll be your fool

    fool for love
    the kind of love that was destined from above

    wipe the tears that ever flo
    your all i need to know
    lets go

    once again when we was passionate
    and full of desire
    Rich you know how to light my fire

    so please let our soul and heart unite
    no longer want to fight
    want to make sweet passionate love to nyte
    i promise i wont byte

    but give enough to make your heart melt
    my love wont leave a welt
    Love unto you is heartfelt

    as we are

    Circling Tyme!!!!!!!!!!!1
    :love:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was poetically deep poet
    Im loving the vibe on this piece poet
    Nice drop for real-Much love poet
     
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    beautiful scribe poet...i am enjoying this one...
     
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    Filter on the path of hope
    and the love i stroke in ink
    my heart cries to end this
    journey on the banks of
    foreverness & happiness
    yet i'm un felt and heard
    silently i spool inside my
    slumber til morrow comes
    i never open the hurt
    and surely didn't want pain
    just a love to hold and tame
    to cal my own
    pedals of this rose linger
    in the blowin windz
    as i rise above once again
    in flyte
    i so loveth thee in heart
    i'm just misunderstood .....

    Thankz tantrum and Mr.Dnommo and Nevar
    the love is felt within family.........................
     
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    real deep on rich i see the level you going to can't wait to see where you end
     
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    Thankz black_soul , surely the ending is near yet unknown
    stay tune as the saga continues
     
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    To earnestly call out from the heart and still not be heard is a painful ache. We all must be careful who and how we love, no one wants to feel yet another heartbreak. We all just need to be understood. Nice flow in response from nevar.
     
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    THIS ONE IS DEEP
     
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    Thankz watz for feeling dis one and the visit

    Thankz ibrahim for the continue love & support
    indeed it gets deeper as tyme go by .............
     
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