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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Nov 21, 2011.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in his hands the sun
    requests permission
    to take its place at the helm
    of the horizon

    he tosses it up high
    points his finger towards the east
    watches the sun skip across the sky
    like a child's yellow frisbee

    but some how it stalls
    he brings his mighty hands together
    forcing the strong wind between them
    to form into a red beachball

    casts it at the sun
    points his finger again
    the sun begins to bounce
    its way to where it belongs

    he smiles and looks at me
    sitting in the tire swing
    bubbles blowing all around us
    he points his finger again

    there baby that's for you
     
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    He better chill ~
    That old jealous moon be tight with God

    Love your work.
     
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    LOL. I was thinking the very same thing. Thank you, my friend. I love your work, too.

    (smile)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da sun-moon together brings a red glow of love
    so he pointed it out only for you !
    beautiful piece.........love it
     
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    precious,
    have you ever seen the sun and the moon
    possess the sky at the same time
    with a longing so dear for each other
    for they are too far apart to touch
    but there they are basking
    in each others glow without a star
    to be found anywhere in their sky
    holding on for as long as they can
    for they both know that the sun
    soon must go and the moon in her pain
    must remain alone in the dark blue sky
    until they can glow together again

    Thank you, my sun tosser. Only you!

    (smile)
     
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    O yes i've seen them cross path
    as it turn to a burning ball of fire
    in da depth of night only to unleash
    self then da missing stars aglow above
     
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    Keep your eyes on the moon my sun tosser, she's gonna give you some fire over there ---------->
    in just a minute <wink>
     
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