Black Poetry : "Circled Confessions" --A poetry-prose peace from a somber scriber

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I tell you I'm thinking of you
    I know you believe me
    but you choose not to let me see
    the pleasure in your knowledge of this-
    your eyes loquaciously tell all suddenly-
    and it's quite beautiful because I depend on you to
    show me your sympathy so that I could become
    closer to thee- to have you would be
    a living fantasy. Did you know that you
    leave me blowed every time I inhale
    second-hand smoke from your sexiness?
    Did you know that when our skins connect you
    make mines tingle? That when I hear your
    voice I long to mingle
    Our tongues just so I could contain a
    part of your beautiful voice and
    try to spread joy to others
    by the mere sound of it?
    That every time you speak your
    lips tease me and mentally
    I am begging for a taste along
    with the ones that are below your waist?
    I'm positive they have the flavor that would kill
    chaste-
    Did you know that I could
    (and have longed to)
    make you reach infamous highs between your thighs
    which will haunt you with cravings after their demise?
    That I have the power to make you adore my kiss
    because of its simplistic bliss that
    I can tell deep down inside you miss? I know nothing
    ever seems real anymore---
    But baby I tell you that I am---
    You create case after case
    of the love jones within me
    I feel like I've loved you deeply previously
    And we are here again, maybe (or not) meant to be
    But your strength sweats out its essence
    to me and I sense it
    The elated joy it makes- that's what makes me crave it
    And suddenly - like this -
    I beg for your forgiveness
    For what is sin without the knowledge of repentance?
    SO can you forgive me for my sins?
    Get to know me within?
    Let me get closer to your heart that I have ever been?
    But wait, that's a bit too heavy a question...
    All I need is one lesson...
    I would like and love to be yours...
    So please at least a small explanation
    Just don't leave me with simply a
    page of circled confessions...

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin' this...
     
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    she's baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack :)
    hey gurl missin this flava of yours here :)
    just WOW :) glad youre back :wave:
     
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    whoa:jawdrop:......i m lovin it!:wave: Welcome Home gurl!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte flow what a way to enter back
    this was off da hook
     
  6. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks you guys....

    School has been a pain in da patootie for me. I finally found time to play my part in the community.

    I have truly missed you guys. :kiss:
    Yall be on da lookout for me!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    THIS WAS TIGHT
     
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    PLAY -
    Heartfelt emotions flowed wit this one here. Nice! Missed you and will definitely keep watching for ya.
     
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    :hot: I don't even know where to begin...in "confessing"
    how much I've missed he heat the "PlaywititPimp" brings
    to the stage.........

    you've been gone much toooooooo long!!!!

    this was (as expected) Hot! :hot: Encore, Encore, Encore
     
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