Black Haiku : Circle...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tashatoya, Jul 24, 2005.

  1. tashatoya

    tashatoya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thought that we were
    Bonded by an endless circle...
    Untruthful things end

    And then i am back
    At square one... six years ago
    Trying to figure me out

    Because you chose to
    Bend the circle until it
    Broke, into two halves
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    "Untruthful things end"
    the words, so powerful, touched
    Optimism reigns
     
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    great peice, but don't dispair. for the square and the circle are ONE.
    each corner of the square each equals 90 degrees and four times 90 is 360...a complete circle. So you were always back at square ONE and complete at the same time....you simply didn't see it.
     
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    the circle with hold
    yet flex into twisted bend
    snaps at the joint too
     
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