Black Poetry : Circle of Oppression

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Get out of the continuum of nothingness

    for your own sake

    --not for mine--

    Break the cycle of narcosis

    by stimulating

    the intellect of your

    3rd eye ~

    tear through

    and free yourself from within

    the confines of mendacity--

    a ring that encloses

    surrounding the pysch ~O~ logic

    ...impairing ... paralyzing

    a weak and fraile --scattered mind

    ...if you only use 10% of your brain
    to think things sensibly through...

    ~ then what, may I ask
    happens to the
    remaining 90% that
    is left unUsed?


    Did you get caught up

    in the pinwheel

    of a phucked up life ~

    --misguided by fortune tellers

    that directed your every inadequate

    move... mislead by half-truths

    So much that

    'Love' -- hated you

    and latent ignorance

    woke up next to you

    or even how ignorance

    follows close behind

    in your footsteps

    until -- at last

    it catches up with you

    ~~ bringing you back

    to the same circle of oppression

    ... accompanied by lies that allure

    and steal your spirit




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2...

    you really went deep N2 the SOULOFASISTA on this one.

    thought provoking.
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    EYE 2 EYE

    TODAY FINDS ME ON THIS EXACT PAGE ..N2....CHECK "NO DOUBT"
    ALWAYS A LESSON IN YOUR SCRIBE.

    FOREVER YOUR STUDENT

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller~

    It's great to know just when a
    piece has evoked someone's cerebration...

    Thanks for reading me!

    :heart:
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GYPSY

    Eye am glad you felt this piece...
    and I too read yourz (it was tight of course).

    Thanks for reading me 2day ~ you are
    oh so kind 2 me!

    Hope all is well... One :heart:
     
  6. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE !

    Girl you've got my mental capacity spinniing !!!1

    Tyght scribe girl just tyght !

    Natasha:heart:

    :eek:
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha~

    Sista-friend ... hold on to your mental; and don't let it go ~ :lol:

    Thanx for reading this piece!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    N2

    TIGHT STUFF
    STRONG DEEP WORDS SPOKEN
    U TOOK ME WIT YA
    GURL U R ONE OF A KIND :heart:
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    I'm glad to know that you
    enjoyed this piece ~
    As you already know, different
    moods tend to evoke
    how we write ~
    And I guess this is yet
    just an example of how I was
    flowin' the other day!

    Thanks 4 the read!

    One.
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Soul

    all truths are only HALF-truths

    you definitely speak Universal Law

    now i'm convinced, you have the gift

    i see between the lines



    Da Street So'ja
     
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