Black Poetry : ChronOlogy

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Millenium miscellany
    when boy meets girl
    -sharing little laughs
    communication's somewhat sterile??
    Giving a few survival tips
    along with his love --time line
    or if I can recall
    correctly
    was it the other way around...
    when girl meets boy
    he laughed at her open heart
    she used his tips to survive;
    .....stepping aside
    through his "no time for love" lines
    and she contemplated his introverted
    conversations
    Recordings are all just pictures
    of events;
    day-by-day, month-by month, year-to-year
    MILESTONES
    etched into ones'
    memory ~
    organized
    chronologically


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Recordings are all just pictures
    of events;
    day-by-day, month-by month, year-to-year
    MILESTONES
    etched into ones'
    memory ~
    organized
    chronologically"


    See there you go again. Just when Ithought you could do no more BAM I'm hit with another one. Keep on keepin on and I'mma keep on readin.


    One
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tryin' not to hit too hard......

    at least these don't hurt... :lol:

    Thanks UbZoRbShUn for da' :heart:
     
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    Chronology? Oh....

    day 1: she picks up the pen

    day 2: she posts her first piece

    day 3:she notices "...I have a knack for scribe"

    present: Still going....50 plus and counting...

    (hark, I hear a book in the making!)

    darn good N2...now I have to go back to the drwaing board on the masses...Sheeeeeeesh! you make a brother work.

    one love, blak
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've forgotten to add something...

    Day 1... you should have also
    added DAS met SGP....

    Day 1 3/4...DAS was poetically seduced
    by SPG.... :wink:

    Day 1 1/2...then DAS gave birth to twins
    paper & pen; their names creative & writing
    they were born in our March Madness....!!

    :heart: ya' doll! You are the twinkling
    in my eye....(or was that glaucoma)? heee heee

    YOU are the truth that I have been long searching
    for...now, get outta da box you be in ~~
     
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    Timing is erythang!!! Agree with Blak's take most def!!!!

    Ya got it N2!!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inauspicious....GQ...

    You and Blak are two of a kind;
    and definitely too much for one
    black woman to handle....NOT!!

    :heart:n' ya' like the Kings you are!

    :kiss:
     
  8. Hunter

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    N2...

    A brillant use of time...lines ;)
    I am definitely loving this one poet
    So much still remains hiding
    In between your lines

    *hide-&-Go-Seek*
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter

    Thanks for stopping by and
    for responding to my piece!
     
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