Black Poetry : Chronicles Of A Bachelor (Part One)

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im a bachelor
    My life is one some brothers dream of
    I have a house many woman to phone
    My appetites outrages when I see a fine philly alone
    I know she wants me
    She put the number in the phone
    Im a one hit her quitter then im not answering the phone
    Its like you didnt exsist-Im trying to leave you alone
    You trying to kick a bachelor off his throne
    Im trying to give a reason for your a-- to leave me alone
    I never had a woman stay like this
    Im trying to do anything to get out of this-(pause)
    She then came to my job now aint this a b----
    Bringing me roses and chocolate like I was her b----
    This feeling she has is a thin line between love and hate
    She better realize the truth and get out my face
    Is the cheating and lying catch up to me hey
    I got to stop thinking like this
    Need some time to think
    I Got to get rid of her
    I need some time to think
    Let me just talk to her see what shes going to say
    I call her up
    Meet me at 5
    And then she says ok
    Now im driving just thinking to myself
    Like ****-what-am-in-for
    ****-what-could-she-be-talking-bout
    Man do i really want to hear
    Yeah I need to get her out my life
    She walks through door of the restaurant
    Looking just as good as before
    She starts telling me she loves me
    I tell her say it again and im out the door
    She says wait a minute
    I say tell me now
    She says I need your help
    I said tell me how
    She says I've been holding a secret on for too long
    I said you better tell me now or girl im out the door
    She says baby
    I say what
    She say baby
    I say what
    I dont know how to tell you this
    Tell me what
    Now im getting so scared I dont know what to do
    She tries to grab my hand
    And I pull it away
    She says the night we had sex
    I say spit it out
    She says the night we had sex
    I say your making me mad
    Okay young boy I used to be a man!!!
    Da--

    To Be Continued!!!!!
    This is not a true story but what would you do??
    Chronicales Of A Bachelor (The Sequel) Is here for your eyes go check it out!!


    Check out part 2 http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=38062
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :laugh:
    lmao....
    lesson no. 1
    you wore that one,
    and...
    lesson no. 2
    whenever we think we Played someone...be careful that someone wasn't playing you.

    There are just two kinds of people in the world...
    let's just say, you had the best of both worlds:laugh:
    nice piece poet, waiting for the end results.
     
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    smh...i am with My Momma QT on this one....this was tight how you brought this...enjoyed the read awaiting part 2

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amazing what can be done with surgery nowadays, isn't it? LOL Looks like the fellow in this story has met his match in more ways than one, watching to see how this "tail" gets wrapped up brotha poet.
     
  5. Tantrum

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    Thank You 4 the love Queen
    Mz Angel
    Watzinaname
    I feel like people go through so many issues like this make the world
    we live in a crazy place. I mean this like Jerry Springer but will see how my man gets out of this one for real!!
     
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    all i can say is okay. thats what we say in the south when your left speechless.
     
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    look at the adams apple and the elbows holmes...
    this ish happened to my boy...and we still clown him bout it...lol

    one love
    khasm
     
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    And i thought I was bad, but you are waaayyyy worse than me.. you know what i mean.
    Nice drop... none the less!:angel1:
     
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    HI Tantrum,
    lol...:) hey it can happen..
    I'm just enjoying your poetry
    I can see you have a lot of fun
    when you script..:)
    I as well will be looking for Part 2

    Peace
     
  10. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You So mUch for the love
    I think this is the reason most poets come to destee
    So much positiveness its love for real
    TY Poetic you crazy for real
    Khasm-Nevar & Bluewater
    I had read and show my love to you all wonderful poets
    Much love 2 all
     
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