Black Poetry : chronic...love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, May 3, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've been ill, my poet cohorts; i am getting well again. i submit my May poem...
    keep up the awesome work destee!

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    from the onset
    i knew
    you would
    infused my soul
    chronic...

    you reside in that
    place i've not
    let be known
    frequenting that
    spot...
    time and time
    again...
    a recurrence of
    your
    "stuff"...
    i'm suffering
    from a chronic
    disease of black man
    brought on from the
    exposure to your
    brother-brown...

    ever present...
    my body reacts
    as i encounter
    your physical that
    vexes my womanhood
    weakening the force
    i try to maintain
    ...you are so...
    troubling...

    yet
    when it comes to
    you
    i become habitual...
    chronic this and that
    yes...
    chronic love

    MsDLite (c) 04.20.01
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So good to see you again Sister Poet, and as always, your ink is strong. But you do know there is no known cure for what has you this way.

    Stay well,
    BE
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsD

    Ya flow is on point. Feelin this chronic love!!:)

    Praying that youi continue to get well!!
     
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    Glad you are getting well your voice is strong and clear and I am glad I lent an ear to hear the smooth melody of poetry you paint

    Thank you
     
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    chronic...did you say

    from the onset
    of games
    the mind played
    in the evening
    before the sun rays fade
    leaving us
    in total disarray
    feeling this way
    and that
    ...bumping into
    aaahh
    yeal
    that
    chronic force
    that keeps us as one
    as i frequent
    that spot
    where few have gone
    come on

    are you betta yet?:)

    ALWAYS GOOD TO READ YOU, MY SISTAH.

    peace.
     
  6. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been missing you MsD. Now you know better to be going through this illness, and not letting me know what's wrong.....We have to talk....

    Bishop
     
  7. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hugs and thanks!

    out of poetry mode, yes, i was really (medically) sick...and did not know it... MISS Y'ALL!
    -------
    back in poetry mode...

    as always my poets
    you make
    my sun brighter
    my moon seductive
    my nights...alluring
    my pen excited
    my paper, orgasmic...

    luvin' y'all like a true poetess!

    (holla at me "all mighty bish")
     
  8. poeticdelight

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    Glad to See Your Better

    We Missed You!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsD!

    Welcome back! I have missed your soulful beauty. This peace speaks to my being in ways I cannot number.

    Be blessed, be well my sistah.

    A
     
  10. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good to be home...

    ...if only for a moment!
    thanks poetic~d...
    and, my sista in spirit...A!!

    writing for sheer enjoyment...
    love's peace is love divine~
     
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