Black Poetry : " Christmas Love " ( dedicated to wife & daughter)

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your love came unwrapped to me
    untilted
    and remained seasonless
    everyday we're together is a holiday
    reason is
    you are my gifts from my God of whom
    one day were
    sent my lost way from his divine sleigh
    from the cold roof of my heart
    down to my soul's fiery chimney....
    i am never empty
    of the presents
    of your presence
    and the aromatic essence, fragrance of infinity
    like milk and cookies
    on the table for real men not rookies
    .. grown and able to fill in where love took me

    as i hang the ornament of your reflections on the tree

    oh what a wonderful time this will be
    when we go shop for the hungry and needy
    never taking for granted that this could be me
    and one day l may need them to feed me
    b/c the greatest gift on earth is sight and how my God and you both see me...
    and as long as we have each other let us light up the sky with a kiss and live life, and this Christmas, freely


    'tis the season
    but before we open our gifts
    let's remember Who is the Reason
    and come close to me b/c right now i am freezin!!
     
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    This was so beautiful! :toast:

    You expressed this just as it should be:

    God's love reflected through your marriage and the love in your marriage reflected through God's love.

    :bowdown:

    Amen!





    ...And see, this kinda talk will git "Daddy" some EXTRA "warming up!" ;) :em2300:
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cherryblossom,,
    i gotta admit, by your reply that my love and motive go hand in hand :D.
    thanx..
     
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    nicely done.. rhythm, imagery, color, aroma, emotion.. nice.
     
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    Who could ask for a greater gift...wonderful piece poet!!
     
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    Hi J'hiah...

    I've always enjoyed the tenderness of your writing. This is such love filled carrying piece and I thoroughly enjoyed every bit of it!

    Merry Christmas to you and yours and be just as blessed in the New Year!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Love is a beautiful thang!!!

    this is dope!
     
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    No words almost....this warmed my heart to see in words what type of love God can bring


    Nicely put poet

    :)
     
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    Da true love from above this was grand
     
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    Merry christmas brother
     
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