Black Poetry : Christmas Blanket

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your permission please,
    to borrow you for a few
    He--, you'll never know
    that I've even used you
    in my flow.
    I need you to be my blanket.
    to cuddle through this season.
    I need something to snuggle,
    I need to have a reason
    to know that all will be ok
    if you're not here with me.
    Christmas Eve, Christmas Day,
    and Christmas during the night
    I'll need the warmth of that blanket
    to ease and calm me right.
    Such a soft and soothing feeling,
    I know it's not your body,
    But nobody is here, and it's healing
    even if it's all in my head.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THE COVER...

    if you don't mine
    as the cover is place
    to trace ya sweet face
    cover u in warmth
    for throughout da season
    leave u a notion of reasons
    to direct u in comfort
    and lay wit affection to
    ya mental u will feel
    as it cuddles u
    caress u wit snuggles
    of thoughts that it's
    real even that i may not be
    i am still close covering thee
    dis christmas eve
    da feeling is my blanket
    wrappin u in close
    i am the winter host
    when u feel lonely
    look above in a vision
    u see da blanket of love
    i'll be huggin u
     
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    Oh blanket from afar,
    tracing my face,
    wiping a tear,
    trying not to focus
    on yester year.
    Keep me safe
    darling dear,
    remind me that
    tomorrow is drawing near.
    Tomorrow can be its own star.
    And change can be
    a positive step,
    a move that's necessary
    to self complete.
    So hold me tight,
    and by and by
    I'll say goodnight
    knowing life goes on....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da cover of caress
    sweet and mild
    from afar to light
    up a smile
    turn da past of yesteryears
    and comfort da lonely tears
    sweep away da fears
    and cover da heart to mend
    from da love deep within
    wrap in warmth to asure
    tomorrow a new day
    movin in the speed
    to remove the sorrow seed
    as the cover blanket
    hold u in grasp tight yet
    tenderly to secure da
    mental mind that today
    and tomorrow ya be just find
    as i cover u
    christmas eve
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your comforter of care,
    so comforting
    makes me aware
    that Christmas Eve is
    the Eve of a magical day
    we celebrate Christ's birth
    and the blessings found his way.
    Comfort is a blessing,
    as well as one who gives heart.
    The warmth is felt in the soul
    of all that you impart.
    The blanket of hope,
    The blanket of love,
    The blanket of faith
    sent forth from above.
    I humbly remember
    the reason for the season.
     
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    sigh... my blanket is still in Detroit. Thank you for this eloquence. Lovely indeed
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, dadachango for your kind response. Merry Christmas.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed as u vision
    the beauty of dis eve
    ya heart filled wit pleasure
    for this the season of CHRIST
    let it be Merry unto u
    and know in spirit
    i'm beside u tonight
     
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    wonderful flow u 2 Merry Xmas..Peace and many blessing
    Blue
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich, Merry Christmas to you!!!!
    Glad you liked the flow of this Bluewater, have a Merry Christmas!!
     
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