Black Poetry : Choking

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waiting there
    in the dark
    candle smoke
    teasing me as it
    rebounds moonlight
    on my iris'
    creating pixelated
    visions of a
    Naked you -
    inner thighs -
    to my hips
    riding bareback
    along the breeze
    that tries in earnest
    to keep you cool...
    as it enters through
    the screened in window...
    .........I lay there
    naked anticipating the
    knock at the door....
    the sweat knocking on the
    hardwood floor playing
    the "Fifth Symphony of
    Sex".....the sweet whispers
    of your eyes as they hide
    behind closed lids...
    and think about my
    desire to go down on your
    thoughts / the fruit don't
    fall to far from the tree
    nor the offspring from your
    dirty mind dipped in
    confections of powdered sugar
    ....my brown sugar....
    waiting for you forces me to want
    2 hold my breath under
    water so I can pass out
    feeling your release....but
    I can't....I've waited too long
    to miss the knock at the door
    so I close my eyes hang a picture
    of you on the dark and
    massage a scream that is developed
    inside of me until it is released
    on the sheets.....I'll leave it
    for you to see / these configurations
    of clouds on blak waiting for your
    rains before I choke again.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew!!

    Can I get a glass of water... or even a tall glass of "dizzy" ...


    Pure FANTASY in this piece ... you get a "69" for this! :lol:


    One :heart:
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLak-NeSs....


    i am totally mesmerized (by You)....

    OneLuv.
    Ga~
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DAYUMMMM!! VERB

    U MADE IT SOUND LIKE PURE THUNDER
    BOOMING UNDER WATER .........SOMEBODY GET
    THE HOSES OUT I FEEL A (((RED ALERT))) COMING ON!
    STR8 P~E~R~F~E~C~T~I~O~N........U GO MY BRUTHA.
    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, perfection c'mon bro ain't even close (yet I'm working on that piece)

    GA, ~~You are now getting sleepy, sleepier...~~you know I'm still working on the piece to make one "faint"...In time...

    N2, water....no...Christian Brothers...I got a "15" watch out now...

    ya'll to much.

    blak
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  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    loving the flow

    you my brotha have great talent

    not only do i respect your work

    i'm a fan
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well uhhh,

    Go ahead and do ya thang dog!!! You get da Hot **** certification...lol

    Too tyght fa words...
    Reas
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas and So'ja,

    my brothers I bow my head and say thanks...I write to keep up with you brothers!

    blak
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  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    ahhhhhhh well ahhhh hmmmm




    One
     
  10. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    knock knock knock

    can i get a cup of your
    confectioned brown sugar
    sweet dark brown shugah?
    :D
    -7
     
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