Black Poetry : Choices

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IfUComeSoftly, Feb 28, 2006.

  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We all got choices in life
    I have made my choice
    It's time for you to make yours
    Deal with what you can control
    And stop trying to control me...
    Please stop it with the veiled threats
    Leave if you are so unhappy
    You are not going to make me be
    With you by threatening to leave me
    Leave me? Bruh we ain’t together
    I told you that I needed space
    Either you are going to give it to me
    Or you can leave if you don’t
    Want to wait
    I really don’t have the time
    Or the inclination to continue this
    Charade
    We let things go to far without
    Repairing what was going on
    I don’t like to argue
    You don’t like anything that
    Can be confused with being serious
    Everything has to be lighthearted
    Well everything was lighthearted
    And peachy keen, on the up and up
    Until the bottom fell out
    And I got tired of fronting
    The fact of the matter is that
    You are a great man
    A wonderful person
    You deserve all the perfect
    Loveliness God has made in this world
    You just deserve from some one else
    That some one else may be me
    Just not the woman that stands
    Before you today
    I have to do me, get myself together
    And then maybe I can think about us
    I don’t know if we can ever get back
    To the place we were before
    I can’t tell you what to do
    I can’t tell you what I’ll do
    All I can say is
    Either you can respect that or you can leave
    Those are the only options
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling all ya emotions flowing right here
    express ya self freely as will let it all out.......
     
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    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you rich for showing me love... appreciate it poet
     
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    most welcome .......vent on , let it all flow
    i'm feel ya
     
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    Sis this was a great poem.... Keep doin' you sis.... Luv ya
     
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    I love this.
     
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    loved the flo sis. i felt ya on this one.
     
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