Black Poetry : Chocolate

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  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i chilled on the beach today
    i tried to get as dark as i could
    darker than all the rest of the women
    who surround you because
    i want to stand out
    i want you to notice me
    akin me to chocolate
    and yearn for my taste
    i want you to describe me
    like you would descrbe chocolate
    velvety, dark, rich, delicious, addicting
    i want to stand out
    i want you to notice me
    akin me to chocolate
    so i'm going back to the beach
    until i'm the shade of brown
    shade of chocolate that you desire
     
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    you are the shade i desire,
    beautiful,
    like pecans and cinnamon...
    smooth like porcelean..
    soft as butter...
    no need to alter
    what the Creator gave you.

    if you were chocolate,
    that would be nice too..
    dark like rosewood,
    smooth like glass..
    warm like cocoa...
    but there is
    no need to alter
    what the Creator gave you.

    it is what it is...
    and what it is is beyond the physical
    your beauty proceeds you
    in my thoughts
    whatever the tone....
     
  3. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no need to alter
    what the Creator gave you.

    it is what it is...
    and what it is is beyond the physical
    your beauty proceeds you
    in my thoughts
    whatever the tone....



    brotha abstract... you flipped that just that fast... i loved your reply... you are certainly a man who is good with words... i can't think of a thing to say... you've said it quite eloquently yourself...

    smh... pecans... people use to call me Pecan... quite a few still do... pronounced like peecan... i am southern... lol

    thank you again abstract...

    well i'll guess i'll try... lol...

    the creator gave me you
    with the skin of crimson caramel
    i just wanted to compliment you
    everywhere you look there's chocolate
    so everywhere you go
    whether it be to the bodega
    or to the kroger or to the QT
    i wanted you to look around
    and see me and yearn for me
    i just wanted you to notice me
    i just wanted constant reminders
    of me and of us every where
    you turn and everywhere you look
    however i now know that it's okay
    i know only one of true importance
    is the reminder of me in your heart
    as long as i'm there i guess
    i don't really need chocolate
    cause i now know that i have
    that lovely shade of crimson caramel
    and he's all mine...

    lol... okay you won...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    too sweet chocolate treat i love this vibe ......
     
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    gurl whats up you sho have been on the prowl lately. calm down sis just come down. have you heard from soblessed.
     
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    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for showing me love rich...i hope you didn't party too hard yesterday...

    nefarious??? i almost called you a heffa... lol... i ain't on the prowl...lol... well maybe i am... but stop it putting me on blast
     
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    Softly My Sista:
    Nice drop. But you know there are all kinds of shades of chocolate. Dark, Milk, White, did I say white? Ok Dark Dark, Milk Milk. lol.
    Much Luv
     
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    and i like long romantic walks on the beach...
    watching the sunset...
    so maybe...
    jus maybe...
    right after the sun sets
    ill be walkin along the beach and not see you...
    hopein i could trip over you and...

    fall in love...

    **** that was a great poem... im really feelin it.
     
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    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lmao.. 4Ever... Chocolate... Smh... Mmmhhhh... I wish I had some chocolate right about now...

    Ghost... aww... i want that too... let me stick my foot out the next time he walks my way.. b/c as it stands he "keeps on passing me by..."

    thanks for the love poet..
     
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    naw just swim in deep chocolate
     
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