Black Poetry : Chocolate Waterfall

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  1. Bksuniqueone

    Bksuniqueone New Member MEMBER

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    A lady once held a piece of chocolate
    She held it so tight in her hand
    It began to melt away slowly but surely,
    Her hand became so hot that a waterfall began to come about

    It wasn't just a regular waterfall but it was a chocolate waterfall
    And this chocolate waterfull just continued to run right through the hands of the lady and before she knew it she looked in her hand and she saw nothing.

    This lady just couldn't understand
    What had happened to this piece of chocolate
    She never felt or never bothered to open up her hand
    And see how the chocolate had begaun to melt or how the melted chocolate had become a chocolate waterfall

    And it's shame because something as great as that piece of chocolate
    had been melted, diluted and washed away without her ever being able to understand it deepness, intelligence, and knowledge.

    So my question to you is
    Is there a chocolate waterfall running through your hands?
    If there is you need to stop it from running and make it whole again
    So that you can understand its deepness, knowledge, and intelligence before the chocolate waterfall runs dry
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this forum is for wave files only post your poetry in one of the two forums
    1. POETRY GET YOUR FLOW ON
    2.QUIET FLOW

    a reminder to notice where you are posting at i will move this post to the right forum
    i ask that you don't add it here un-less it's in a wave file for family & poets to hear
    thank you in advance
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the concept and the message within. Why does greatness have to be dissolved and melted away before we pay attention? Flow on.
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi and welcome,
    wonderful piece,
    have you really seen chololate melt, and when cooled ...form it's shape in the same stage it melted in? ...deep ...
    you hold a mighty pen.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Love this confectionary bliss. :welldone:
     
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