Black Poetry : Chocolate Thoughts

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been awhile since I've visited
    the Candy Store
    And spoke about all the sweet
    delights I have seen there before
    But lately the kind that
    have gotten my attention
    Are those chocolate confections
    too numerous to mention :blowkiss:
    Let's see, there's mocha, semi sweet,
    caramel nugget, so delicious
    They even have bits of chocolate in those
    health bars that are supposed to be nutritious
    And truth be told there was one chocolate drop
    that slowly drove by the other day
    grinning at me, skin smooth as milk chocolate
    Lord Have Mercy, I had to turn away
    too shy to really smile back
    and keep my composure intact
    but I'm gonna have to get over that, cause a
    chocolate man sure is yummy, and that's a fact
    That hunk of Nubian sweetness
    will never come to know
    that he inspired this meek sista
    to actually flow....
    But even us quiet sistas
    got to get our groove on sometimes... :donttell:
    I've been made to feel less than lovable lately,
    despite what I may have written in my rhymes... :(
    <Deep Sigh>
    So, let me thank you for giving
    me a reason to smile and say,
    here's to the next time you happen
    to sensually cruise by my way
    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all kind of sweets to feast on
    this was tasty
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not as frisky as my old piece Candy Store and More, but figured I'd do something different. Glad you liked it Rich, appreciated.
     
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    Nice flow
    Nothing better than a chocholate man...LOL
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL...yes indeed Intrepid, thanks for responding so.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooh,la,la
    I like this
    hold on a sec while I'm
    getting a Twix
    Very nice
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl!! Youu gets love with this poem. I liked it!!!!! :clap:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope that Twix hit the spot, Sweetbaby face. Thank you, and nice to "see" you.
    Hey there SwtT, happy to know you liked this piece. Appreciated poet.
     
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