Black Poetry : Chocolate swirl...you rocked my world!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dark chocolate skin wide and pleasing grin.
    Big heart full of wonder....
    Laughter like the thunder!
    Under your spell I fell.
    My nature starts to swell!
    My redbone to yo Big Chocolate...
    Delicious to the taste...
    I make haste to grab you by the waist.
    Bowing under your warmth.
    Melting in our embrace...warm chocolate kisses
    all over the place!
    Swirling begins, we are no longer "Just friends!"
    Your Caribbean/British accent purrs, this is the
    beginning not the end.
    I lose myself in your gyrations, lost in my own
    imagination...as two melt together...I ask my
    self and answer "I never...."
    Never knew that I would feel again the way I do.
    Chocolate swirl, you rocked my world!
    Cascading drops of sweetness, all to my completeness.
    Ahhhhhhhhhhh! This is delicious.
    I taste and feel no guilt!
    BJS(C)2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ain't that chocolate tasty !!
    it's beautiful when it's mix right
    and the sweetness from it last a long time
    tyte flow sistah !!
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you scribes!

    Thanks for reading this little piece...
    It was delicious to write as well....
    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I know it was
    make me think u has a sweet tooth !!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh this was sweet
    i like this vibe.....
    tight flow:angel1:
    much love sis....
     
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    aw suki...lol puts a WHOLE NEW meaning to "hot chocolate" :lol:
    hope hes ready for msluciousb :D
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Triniti!

    Yes indeed, he is! LOL Thanks for the support!
    Chile you are like a good bra! Holding me up
    in all the right places and that's for dam sho!

    Blessings On Your House! :x:
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is nothing like that chocolate love.. except some caramel..LOL
    I am feeling this flo
     
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    mmmm
    loving that chocolate
    vey nice indeed
    Peace
     
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    the saga continues....

    the saga continues....with the carribean/british gent...

    Girl......does he have a brother?

    This piece was hot, hot, hot!

    love the passion in your pen...Msluscious!
     
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