Black Poetry : Chocolate Sundae

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Frozen
    sugared
    cocoa
    milked
    iced
    cream
    cold
    treat

    It
    tasted good
    but it melted
    to quickly

    I had
    a chocolate sundae. On a Sunday. One day...

    And I thought of choc(you)late
    as I ate
    to the very last spoon-- full
    ... then
    I threw the empty container away

    now ~

    my thoughts of you,
    Sunday,
    and the
    ice cream
    are all gone.




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    N2

    so quick
    just one lick
    a hit and miss
    what a trip


    it melted to fast N2
    you got to give me part 2


    DSS>
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sat down 2 a
    caramel coffee float
    restraint broke
    added marsh(mellow)
    and walnuts
    whipcream
    and
    strawberries

    ..all this in fact..
    took place in
    the back
    room
    eaten from the
    small
    of your
    back

    ~no spoon
    :spin:

    GOTCHA !

    PEACE
    G-MAN
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    chocolate

    a treat to feast
    done
    gone
    lickin
    chops
    from
    da
    sundee
    spot
    cold but true
    its gone and done
    i need to see pt,#2
    mo! mo! mo!!
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well, i have the usual word, for this one: TYGHT!!! what a thought...i'm lovin' it, gurl. keep on scribin'.
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja

    So you say it melted too fast... :lol:
    I'm soooo sorry .... :wink: I doubt I can come up with a part 2 for ya' Boo!

    Thank you for reading~

    One.
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsy

    Thank you dearest -- for the dance! As always I'm lovin' it ...
    fo' sho'~!! :wink: :kiss:

    Much :heart:
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Look who's dancin' a bit! :D

    Thanks sugah, for reading this piece!

    One.
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    List~

    Hey gurl! Thanks for the love!
     
  10. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sunday

    sunday
    melted my chocolate frame--
    thoughts of me gone--

    *she 'un-know me' now*
    thought i pleased her soul
    thought i gave everything she needed
    yet
    I thought incorrectly...

    you took spoonfuls
    i spoonfed--
    thinking all was as sweet as I

    funny how
    sunday be...
    hot enough to melt and erase--
    your memories--
    of
    me.


    sean.
     
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