Quiet Poetry Lounge : Chocolate Soup

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovesDestiny, Dec 19, 2007.

  1. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where, oh where, can our black kings go?
    When will they just let them be?
    The attitudes of this world can be oh so cold!
    Where can YOU go my king to be free?

    They don’t care if you had a flat tire
    And had to change it in the passing lane
    They don’t care if you lost your desire
    Because you got bumped off your regular gig again?

    Friends don’t let friends drive drunk, or so they say.
    But they don’t even try to keep you in the loop
    What happens when you get sick and have to take off work a day?
    Don’t worry my love I’ll make you soup!

    Soup in the morning, soup in the noonday, soup at midnight if you wish
    Soup with baked chicken, soup with prime rib or soup with deep fried catfish
    Soup in the bed, soup in the car, soup on the elevator ‘cause that’s my style
    Soup anywhere and anyway you like it but always served with a smile!

    Chicken Noodle Soup, Potato Soup or whatever you love a lot
    I’m pretty particular about what I like because my favorite soup is chocolate.
    Creamy, Smooth, Delectable, a Tasty, Savory snack
    Rich, Sweet, Scrumptious…the cravings keep me coming back!

    Chocolate licks my wounds and makes me want it more
    With every satisfying bite…I forget what I came for.
    As my heart begins to beat faster…the sweat begins to roll
    from the top of my eye brow to the spot on my neck that makes my toes curl.

    Bite after satisfying bite as I continue to lick my lips
    With every caress of my tongue around my chocolate I feel a tingle in my hips
    The chocolate begins to take over and melts all over my breasts
    The warm heat from the chocolate perpetuates the sensations in my clitoris

    Nipples rise and perk to form a hard but tasty mound
    The chocolate begins to numb my mind and forces out the sweetest sounds
    It oozes down my thighs to form a sweet mixture of chocolate glaze
    My body shakes in ecstasy as I’m lost in an unconscious daze.
    I begin to lose control of all that I’ve ever known
    Chocolate Soup IS really good for the soul and warms my spirit down to the bone!
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi HopelisRomantic
    I love it..wow!
    Your drop had me humming a tune, this is a very uplifting piece. This is a wonderful
    poem that I could easily remember. You have a very catches rhythm with your flow.
    Much love. I truly enjoyed the course of your poem.

    Peace~N~Love
     
  3. garlicsalt99

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  4. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you BlueWater. I had a lot of fun writing this.

    Garlicsalt99 - your "My Hot Chocolate Fix" was the inspiration for Chocolate Soup. I absolutely LOVED it!!!!! I have to confess "My Hot Chocolate Fix" made me blush...LOL!!!
     
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    Feel you on this!

    I'm on the lookout for some chocolate soup. Nice piece here Poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwww! y'all bout to make me bring out a chocolate twist
    love this joint too
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something that our brothers will certainly appreciate, being understood and taken special care of. Flow it like you know it poetess.
     
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    There is a lot of chocolate go on around here lol. I love love chocolate so I'm not complaining. Great write.
     
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    Gurl...........

    You gots me wanting some chocolate..............dangit!
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling your preference girl ditto

    um

    sounds tasty

    i'm saying to myself i like glazed doughnuts, i like chocolate

    chocolate glaze?

    hmmmmm(mmmmm)

    lol
     
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