Black Poetry : Choas among us!!!!!! part two of Sucidal I am...

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I gave you my view on what I must end

    My lyfe is too precious to end

    Over a man I will never ​
    To all who love me how would they react

    That God's child wanted to commit such a painful act

    But choas is among us​
    How many times must we go back and forth with this?

    How many times must we use his name in vain?

    We both went before him asking him to bless this union

    So tell me where did we go wrong

    Kids want us to get it together

    You got me like this how can we move past on this

    When constantly the devil is in my ear​
    Feeding me lies making us miserable​
    Miserable
    Miserable
    Miserable​
    You dont want to marry me if I'm having these SUCIDAL THOUGHTS

    You would rather me go on and let my spirit at ease

    (Devil intervening)

    Oh you so-call righteous people all the same
    You never know him until you get in trouble
    You have been sinning all this time
    Now I give you all the sin you and him can commit
    Now you want him to come in and cleanse your heart
    Your wasting your time
    Give up
    Hell is where you ought to be
    You should be with me
    Everytime you and Lue argue
    I'm right behind you coaching you
    Yes I am Gipetto, I pull the strings in both of your [email protected] lives
    (shaking my head in disbelief)
    Don't shake your [email protected] head at me
    I didnt tell you like your first Mother Eve to eat from the Forbidden tree
    I told you both what you wanted to hear
    It was up to you to obey
    But here you chose me over God
    Cut yourself and let me drink what is meant only for me
    I won't feed you the poison God has been feeding you
    Why do you think he let you fall?
    He doesn't care about Eve's daughter or Adam's son
    Both of you are a total waste to this world anyway
    Die with me
    Tell Lue, I so want him to join me
    In this [email protected] unholy matrimony
    Give him the knife too
    I'll marry you both in the name of
    Choasssssssssss
    (covering my ears)
    Face it sweetie you were meant to fail
    To fail with all that is before you
    Your love is with me and only me
    Stop what are you doing
    Oh get off your knees
    Oh betta yet stay down
    Continue you and Lue to be my
    Tricks
    Yeah join the rest of the tricks of
    MY WORLD......​
    (Nevar)
    Oh Lord shield me, lift me lord
    Lift me
    I need you know
    Lord lift me from this
    Choas.........

    to be continued.....​



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  2. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    Choas among us!!!!!! part two of Sucidal I am... So True!


    Awesome!

     
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    I am left speechless with no words to say.
     
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    When we forget about God, oh the chaos that can creep into our lives. Your pen's flair has caught my attention, still waiting for more...
     
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    deeply felt and so on point so true it's among us indeed
     
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    nevar,

    Very welcome, I agree with all posters, keep it flowing!

     
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    Indeed sister :read:
    There is most def power in prayer sister... wishing you the best no matter what happens
     
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