Black Poetry : Chinese Restaurant Whispers

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  1. waynethomas

    waynethomas Active Member MEMBER

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    "If he’s not your man, kiss me..."

    No, Stuttering is not known to me
    But
    Repetition to stress emphasis is needed I see so...

    "If he is not the person that you call on as your man,
    Kiss me..."

    And please do not give the stare like…
    "Didn’t you see that we just walked up in here
    As he then
    Gentlemanly pulled me up a chair
    To brush my hair aside just to kiss me"
    Because yes, I saw...

    And I’m also seeing as you watch me
    As he was doing his
    "Agenda setting expressions"
    Towards you
    Knowingly in front of me,
    And all of the time you were watching me like
    I was watching this scene...

    And there was a pause in time until you realised,
    Just In time,
    Before you conciseness let go of it’s
    Clasp of stare at me
    Which*almost exposed your vision being focused on a
    Distant figure,
    And for all his vigour
    His attention was not held in your minds sight.

    So
    Save his future blushes
    And show him for one night that your with him
    And not me,
    Hiding your preoccupation of reading
    My eyes which whispered from a distance
    For you to obey me and...

    Get up.
    Walk over to me.
    Run your fingers over my lips.
    And kiss me...
    *
    No?
    Well enjoy your night.
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    a real flip mode poem huh

    lol
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, sometimes we see what we want to see, sometimes we wonder, gee, what if? Creatively posed, with a very endearing quality to it.
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL! Havent we all been at this place at one point or another? Great piece!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff been here before
     
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