Black Poetry : Chinese fan vainted in the middle of electric Boogie( part Two)

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2 Second Shock wave....

    Nights in the dutch Carribien were quiet and eazy and somethimes lonely
    but i finaly got the change to boogie to....
    Company left me standing there in the club cause they were lovers and i was(as a friend told me) the 3rd Bump....
    so i spaced there on my own....
    Than these eyes pierced trough me....and they didnt even killed me....

    Was he my vision Man ......?


    He kept burning trough My iglo....
    Finaly mister Rico from Peurto made this signal gesture with his pointing finger to come over to him..........

    I was afraid because it looked like as if he was going to grab me and drag me into his cave and restore me to its old state.......
    and eat me alive or he would flute at Seabiscuit to come and pick us up and bring us to a treehouse in kombai,so no one could find me....

    I turned around and wanted to go for the run but my company wanted to make shure that for that night ...........i wasnt their 3rd Bumb.....
    So they turned me around and said "'You go back there"" ...
    I didnt even had to make two steps furter cause he was already standing there in front of me.....

    Nice smile,with deep brown eyes very captivating........
    and he started to dance "'Living tha vida Locca"'
    We didnt even danced real close....
    but it was a beautifull vibe we Posed...
    this moment i wont forget cause ....

    ""Oeps My chinese fan got wet..
    because of the sweat that jumped of my forehead..
    i couldnt hide my glance....
    Disire it was there written all over my blushy Face ..."'
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    ok...ok...
    i peep da scenerios...
    keep crusin'n on da craft....
    nice vibe here...
    peace
    khasm
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes
    nice write..:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' snap dis was off da hook lovin it ...wow liberty
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what happen to brotha at the cafe lol :lol: :look:
    :lol:
    I'm gon need for you to invest in a stronger fan lol :D
    just teasin gurl lol
     
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    oh my goodness
    i am loving this :)
    good
    nice
    wonderful :)
    Peace
     
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