Black Poetry : Chinese fan vainted in the middle of electric Boogie (part one)

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1 First Schock wave......

    Nights in Holland were loud and crowdy ,cold...
    and lonely to.....
    Stuck on the computer down at the studant cafe,confused of all that was happening to me.A force forced me to look away from the screen that day and there i saw this young man playing table-football........

    Was he My Vision Man.....?

    One night i was leaving the building and he and his friends were standing in the hallway.He wanted to approach me ....,i stood still and it was the first time i looked him in the eye...
    sweet smile,with deep black brown eyes very captivating.
    His friends were lauging in a kind of way as if they were thinking "in youre dreams brotha "'..
    He said : "'i know what youre thinking....youre thinking what does this young getto vagabond wants from me "' i maybe look dumb and that i have nothing to offer but you dont know me"" ,""never judge a book by its cover""...
    as i said : ""i dont, ...........................and you dont know what i,m thinking""
    Than he said : "" i like you""
    And i thought now that is a straight up brother .....i like that....
    Than his friends started to laugh and said ..:"'do you know how old he is "'
    than he interupted them and said "'You see how ignorant they are they dont know anything about love""
    I smiled and i said but i have to go now ..time to sleep maybe i see you around.....

    Another lonely night i sat there behind the computer Posting my poems ......
    there he was again,and observed me from my left......leaning over this short wall with his arms intwined over eachother............
    after along silents he said............""hi""...........................
    I kept looking at the screen and said "" hi ""' to......
    I wanted to stay cool but he could see the little smile comming from the left side of my mouth...
    He changed his possition by leaning with his head on his folded hands .........

    ........and kept looking at me.......

    I finaly stated to feel uncomvertable but warm to......
    ,he had a good energie.......
    I could hear him writing Poetry in his head.....
    ,he was looking for the words to express...
    He finaly choose the safe way and ended up singing along with a song that was playing on the background in the cafe.......it was ""hey sexy lady"" by Shaggy.......
    He stopped after singing one line...........as i saw him listening to the rest of the lirrics from the song.......,
    thinking.............."'wrong choice"' ...""Now she thinks i,m going for her Booty wooty.....
    But he didnt know that i was flatterd anyway by the act........


    Than he finaly leaned his head more on his left arm as if he wanted to fall asleep in that possition looking at me that way..........
    Than after a long silence"( as if the frog opend his mouth and said "'Kwak)
    he said ........
    ""youre eyes are beautifull"'....................

    ,and i was suprised by his words because , my eyes! my eyes! .....

    .....he noticed my eyes....the window of my soul....

    They always came up to me complementing my hair ,my body, and booty,and tooty,my thrills or skills ,my style or smile,not that i didnt apriciated it....but those things are just temporary.....
    but he noticed my eyes!...
    He said: "'inspite of the grieve that serounds them they are still shining.....
    ...............imagine how they would look without it........
    Than he said sumthing that makes me laugh untill this day......

    he said : "'Can i just borrow them ......i would put them on my bedside table..
    and i would look at them Eternaly..."'


    Now he isnt my vision man,because he has a child and lives with the mother....

    but it was a moment i wont forget because....

    ""Oeps my chinese fan vainted,,,,
    because of the heat that came from my forehead....
    i coulnt hide my glance....
    desire it was there written all over my blushy Face
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this is sweet...
    off to part two..
    peace
    khasm
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    indeed this was so sweet...nice write lady:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loved this scribe wow !
    headed to pt.ll
    dis was very nicely done
     
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    awwwww...ok let me go on to part II b4 I get all wishy washy LoL
     
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    ahhhhh
    my sister this is nice
    now i am off to part 2
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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