Black Poetry : Chills Down My Spine

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your cocoa butter skin
    Illuminates my soul within
    Vibrating my mind, body, and soul
    Every time I get a chance to hold
    Your body
    Your sweet, soultry body
    Next to me
    I sometimes vision you within me
    And then besides me
    Next to me
    Everywhere around me
    And it sends chills down my spine
    Everytime
    I tell another girl that you are MINE
    That you are my one of a kind
    Fine
    Like Wine
    African like King from another time
    Chills down my spine everytime you look at me
    Sex me
    Lay down next to me
    And then make sweet LOVE to me
    Taking me on voyage after voyage
    Dreaming of marriage
    And a baby carriage
    Because you are deep into my heritage
    Chills down my spine
    Each and every time
    You are near me
    Speaking to me
    So sexy
    But raspy
    Just for me
    That's what you are to me
    For me
    You are the dew to my morning
    The sun in my rising
    The reason for my fasting
    You are my king
    And for that, you are the reason I have chills down my spine
     
  2. sherlita~

    sherlita~ Member MEMBER

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    love the imagery,beautiful indeed
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how tasteful the was mad sweet ...................
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well laid out piece. i could follow the flow....
    thanx for sharing.....
     
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