Black Poetry : Chillin At Midnight ( the 1:00 blues)

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she wanted to mellow out
    while swallowing pill late Sunday Mourning...
    to curl up under blanket and watch the drama
    slow pass...regress back to childhood memories where
    she jus didn't give a ****...

    Breathe soul ight-heartdedly into her worry-filled
    day, sippin root beer though a long straw in Jamaca,
    with pinnapple on the softer side of life to sweeten the breezes
    that carressed her face, satisfied her sweet tooth,
    and told her to jus be still...

    Faces and words pace generations down the line...
    (she was that black sheep that made EVERYONE hang their head)
    or at lease thats what they said...

    had to make her think on the flip-side of thangs,
    if there was one...

    Wait...did she smell burnin?
    she thinks her *** catchin fiyah...oh shoot....
    well it looks like the demons that lacerated
    her soul to get hold finally did and pulled
    her into the dark abyss...

    Maybe she needed to get baptized
    to cleanse away what they thought of her
    the pain that she let herself be defined by others

    Waz as clear as winter snowflakes huggz, after hot shots
    of burbon burnin the back of ur throat,
    and 24 red-white-and blu death pills
    being digested with no escape of death

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep cover this was deep and felt too sistah
    ya pen is a blessing to the page flow on
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for feelin me rich...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    I like this piece Story your poetry is just that stories that make me think too hard lol I love this sistah flow on :toast:
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol..thanks sistha jus tryin out a new style...gots love fo ya...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    What I get from this is someone tryin to forget what they have become in others mind, but it's not working. Anyway, nothing wrong with a deep scribe, or trying something new, you still put your stamp on it.
     
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    Whoa, yeah, we all been to that place of intense pain before. This is wonderful, story.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love all...
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    -story
     
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