Black Poetry : Chillin At Midnight (2:00 realization)

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stratus clouds hovered ova nekkid putuations
    that revolved around the cords that hailed
    the voice hiding in the back of my throat....

    i would sigh and fell the wind blow
    in some African land where the (fault)cets
    didn't work in some mans underground...

    my mynd concieved lost entitys
    forgotten by statements that
    stabbed me like a butcher knife....

    i used to form silent retoric
    that caught to the others
    like duck tape and burned there open flash....

    besides the 1,000,000,000 tymes
    i forgot who i really was, i would always
    be defined and redefined by the voices
    pounding the inside of my skull
    endlessly.....

    i would suffer from delusions branded
    by others insecurities....
    If i could only learn not to listen to what others say...

    copywrite 2004, all rights reserved...
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo story, what else can I say but it's another masterpiece.....it was madd deep.....and I was feelin' it.......madd props sis
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...thanks fo' the love sistha...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed u really did it again tyte piece....
     
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    Yea, lil sis, but you listen to these because they speak to you so deeply, you just amaze me story.
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love yall...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Story you are
    truly a blessing
    to read!
    I love when you
    drop the knoweledge
    on me!!!!!!!
    You are deep LIL' SIS!!!!!!!
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks purple, jus droppin what i know....
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wow..
    from the lst piece i read to this...such creative energy...
    you are wonderful....flow on....
     
  10. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was a hott piece keep writin cuz imma keep readin!!!


    :lips: :read: :roll: :wave:
     
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