Black Poetry : child's play

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  1. blaqquebeauty

    blaqquebeauty Member MEMBER

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    you come close to me
    and i shiver
    i am so scared but trying to act mature
    for so long i have dreamed of this
    for so long i have been waiting
    my
    no, our time has come
    my palms are sweaty
    my heart is racing fast
    i nervously smile at you
    while you motion for me to relax
    you touch my cheek
    your thigh now grazes mine
    the heat from your breath is upon my neck
    you tell me to relax
    "lie back" you say
    i look at you and nod in agreement
    i inhale and exhale deeply like it would be my last
    within one simple thrusting motion of your hips
    all of my innocence has been lost
    when you kissed me, my braces disappeared
    when you longingly looked at me, my pigtails fell loose
    when you touched me, my breast became full and round
    when you loved my body with yours, my belly grew
    my innocence is lost
    never to return again
    but a new life has been added to mine
    i shall treasure hers
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very nicely done
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, you mastered this piece of innocence lost. Take a bow.
     
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    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS WAS VERY NICE!!!
    VERY WELL DONE!!!












    :jumping:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, this is posed with such class
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] i absolutely love the way this was posed
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    innocene LOST or virtue gained? :) you posed it so sweet sista :)
     
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    Luver2B Active Member MEMBER

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    It's amazing how many ways one can feel about something that must of us have experienced. Thanks for putting this down on paper, well in 1's and 0's.
     
  9. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Beautiful Baptism to Womanhood...

    A Precious Precious Poem
     
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