Black Poetry : childish love...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Apr 24, 2001.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your smile
    Radiating childish love
    But I’ve had enuff
    Of your games and ****
    Sitting there
    Caressing the clyt
    Body
    Trembling and ****

    But that’s o’kay

    I can resist
    Temptations of the flesh
    Like this
    And
    That
    And
    All those games you play
    I’m not going out that way

    O’kay

    I know
    What you think and say
    “I’ll tease him to death
    and force him my way”
    Twisting your body
    Gyrating like this
    And
    That
    And
    Blowing me a kiss
    Lips
    Hmmm
    I wish
    .
    .
    .
    NO!
    Don’t you have someplace to go
    To hang with yo’ gurls
    Or, maybe, a show

    When your heart is full grown
    Come back…and we’ll see
    If you can truly hang
    With a brutha like me
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller

    this is a universal piece because it can apply to some of the brothas out there too. especially this verse

    When your heart is full grown
    Come back…and we’ll see
    If you can truly hang
    With a brutha (sista) like me

    I'm married and technically out the game so to speak, but my single friends male and female have told me stories that read exactly like your poem. With your permission of course I would like to share this with one of my friends..


    One
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speak & Write the ...

    truth....I agree with UbZoRbShUn...
    can definitely be a "uni(sex)" piece...
    I bought into the tagline -

    [*] When your heart is full grown...

    and it was powerful!

    Thanks Baller~
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOOOHHHHHH ****!!

    Baller... My Brutha!!

    this is... MAGNIFICENCE IN VERSE!!
    i caught myself clapping... & if i wasn't
    so **** busy here at work i would have
    attempted to scribe a response in verse...

    i can dig it!! keepdoinyourthangbaby!!

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feeling you, sistahs...

    it could apply on both fronts. there are men, too, whose hearts haven't grown up, yet...moreso than women. THANKS FOR THE READ.

    UbZoRbShUn...permission granted in the name of ENLIGHTENMENT.

    peace&muchlove.
     
  6. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is........

    REAL
    raw
    nitty grit
    TRUTH
    I've seen it...a long time ago I've been it
    perfection and nothing less
    is what from baller
    we all expect!
    ~peace~
     
  7. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say it!

    Say it now!--Show us what you got--I liked this--we are nbot all swayed easily as some might think by the hot box and wet skin--you say it--Ra

    here's one for you to chew on by Amun-Ra

    come to the Forums and comment on Who's Fooling Whom? (Does Religion Work?)

    http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php3?threadid=1366
     
  8. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifully written for those playas
    in da game .......shameless nuff
    the mind gotta grow up to da body
    and the heart need warming again
    boyeeee!! i stump my feet twice
    u r so right and tight ..schooling
     
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    Ya don't know

    Man I'm tired of playin dese games too. Hey,baller we should be together. Hee hee hee,I agree with the rest some people just aren't even there yet. THey aint even on your intellect,well for the deep minded crowd of black folk or at least something like that. It can be a battle truly a struggle to deal wit those kind of people. Oh lawd! Don't get me started!Loved this one. Transends the boundaries
    Desert Storm
     
  10. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cant tell you how much im feelin this.... So many times you want to say..... "What else ya got"

    Thanks bro...

    8th!
     
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