Black Poetry : childish love...

[baller]

Your smile
Radiating childish love
But I’ve had enuff
Of your games and ****
Sitting there
Caressing the clyt
Body
Trembling and ****

But that’s o’kay

I can resist
Temptations of the flesh
Like this
And
That
And
All those games you play
I’m not going out that way

O’kay

I know
What you think and say
“I’ll tease him to death
and force him my way”
Twisting your body
Gyrating like this
And
That
And
Blowing me a kiss
Lips
Hmmm
I wish
.
.
.
NO!
Don’t you have someplace to go
To hang with yo’ gurls
Or, maybe, a show

When your heart is full grown
Come back…and we’ll see
If you can truly hang
With a brutha like me

 

[UbZoRbShUn]

Baller

this is a universal piece because it can apply to some of the brothas out there too. especially this verse

When your heart is full grown
Come back…and we’ll see
If you can truly hang
With a brutha (sista) like me

I'm married and technically out the game so to speak, but my single friends male and female have told me stories that read exactly like your poem. With your permission of course I would like to share this with one of my friends..


One

 

[N2urSoul]

Speak & Write the ...

truth....I agree with UbZoRbShUn...
can definitely be a "uni(sex)" piece...
I bought into the tagline -

[*] When your heart is full grown...

and it was powerful!

Thanks Baller~

 

[GA_Sunshyne]

OOOOOHHHHHH ****!!

Baller... My Brutha!!

this is... MAGNIFICENCE IN VERSE!!
i caught myself clapping... & if i wasn't
so **** busy here at work i would have
attempted to scribe a response in verse...

i can dig it!! keepdoinyourthangbaby!!

NothinButLove...
Sunshyne~

 

[baller]

i'm feeling you, sistahs...

it could apply on both fronts. there are men, too, whose hearts haven't grown up, yet...moreso than women. THANKS FOR THE READ.

UbZoRbShUn...permission granted in the name of ENLIGHTENMENT.

peace&muchlove.