Black Poetry : Chicken heads and shrimp

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    Im flowers, candy, movies, dinner and a back rub
    all rolled up in one.
    Im feet massages, aroma therapy bubble baths and I dont mind taking that trip downtown.
    Im sweet to the eye and tempting to the soul, but im outta control.
    I cant hold my my lust no more.
    I tell woman what they want to hear, even when Its something I really dont wanna say.
    "excuse me miss, but whats your name , can I buy you a drink....
    your eyes are sooooooooo......

    bullshyte, thats all.
    because the one who thinks she special is only but 5th in a line of many other special woman...
    yeah I wanted to be married but, the weight I just cant kerry.
    I rather tarry with kerri's bush, and fralock with terri and lay down with Mary and cuddle with miss thang with all that ***...
    but where is it getting me?

    MAYBE am i some kind of cyber pimp,
    always lookin for Chicken heads and shrimp
    acting like cause her *** is biggggg .....she is misses right
    jump and hug her tight cause i can make love all **** nite
    rubing and touching thangs only her doctor and i know about
    all I can do is sigh
    cause if she walks by a tight *** like a onion makes me cry
    like a baby
    saying dumb ****z like "girl let me pay your student loan ...or
    how much is it for your cell phone...bill"

    the power of the p.u.ss.y...is stronger than crackhead under arms
    to my alarm..but then again i always knew
    Im flowers, candy, movies, dinner and a back rub
    all rolled up in one.
    Im feet massages, aroma therapy bubble baths and I dont mind taking that trip downtown.as long as the streets are clean....hookup
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep stuff here i feel ya
     
  3. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well I'll be more than willing 2 be
    that one, lovin' this 2 the fullest.
    Yr honesty is endearing and warm,sweetie
    Flow on.
     
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    liking it :bowdown:
     
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    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    chickenheads and shrimp... original 4real
     
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    man after reading dis again i mean whoa !
    this was str8 fly off da hook
     
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    …the satire
    You present here
    Makes one wonder…
    Why “shrimp” isn’t spelled “skrimp”
    When it’s placed next to the word “chickenhead”…lol
    It’s kind of a dialectical thing…u know :look:

    This piece was smart, with a quickness of wit
    That most probably won’t get…
    As it slices through the subject of how
    Women allow themselves to be preyed
    Upon…like a hot knife through butter…
    You never cease to beat around the bush
    …with the punch :skillet:
    The jumps from your flow

    Do yo thang poet…I’m checkin u

    out :bullseye:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I first read this, it made me think, "Umph, wow", and I shook my head. If someone wants to get pimped, there are folks more than willing to oblige. Flow on....
     
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