Black Poetry : cherryblueblackstrawberry (first draft)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I could hold you every hour
    on the hour
    trap you between the O and the U
    will you catch me in the middle of
    loving you? I'd drown loving you...
    go down three times whispering tones
    Oh my, my, my and die loving you
    Can I taste your sanctuary? greet
    your cherryblueblackstrawberry
    tip of the iceberg french kissed by
    blakverb g-spot and watch it melt
    cause it's hot / rinsing me in
    your elixir fluid excellence /
    If I could hold you every hour
    on the hour can I die loving you?

    (c) 2000 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Are you for real?!

    I don't care if it is a fantasy brotha - you got it like that and this one is hella tyght!!

    Lovely...
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak,

    Ya gonna have all the honeys up in here like ya did on the Fro!!!

    Sweet flow!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb...

    now i always try to be orygynal...
    but i have to borrow a portion of
    my response from n2...

    "are you for real?!" (lol)

    scribin' like dis... you can die...
    cry... fly... try lovin' me anyway
    you want!! that's if i don't die
    first!! this was off da chain mane!
    but you know that ryght?! rrryght!!

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    blak!

    whoa nelly! now this was some hot stuff here hunnie! man u just keep em commin dontcha boo?
     
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    my my my!!!
    the man blakverb
    to tyght and smooth
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i shooda knowed this wasn't
    'bout no new flavor of koolaid

    my my my

    *turn'n the ac up again*

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Juicy!

    What can I say? This was sweet and to the point--Amun-Ra
     
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    cherryblueblakstrawberry?

    dayum, Blak.
    why you gotta mess with the ladies heart-of-hearts...soul's center...like that?

    hold on to her, Blak.

    peace.
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank ya'll...I gotta go...I got some cherryblueblackstrawberry dessert waitin' to be eaten :laughing"

    one love, blak
     
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