Black Poetry : CHERISHED MEMORY

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  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An edge of
    moonlight
    streams
    across my
    eager face.

    I sense
    the warmth
    of your love
    embrace
    my hungry soul.

    Scattered roses,
    scented candles,
    and a little Sade
    playing on the stereo,
    gives aura to this
    lust-filled room.

    I glance over
    and meet your
    golden brown eyes
    with mine, amber,
    passionately, alive.

    Your fevored
    caresses reach
    parts of me
    long since
    forgotten, if
    ever known.

    The calm fever
    of your breath
    breezes across
    the back of
    my neck, taking
    me to quiet ecstasy.

    The touch of your
    desiring hands all
    over my wanton body,
    ignites my dormant heart
    and sets my sleeping core's
    being, gently, afire.

    I slip into
    the grace
    of your
    angelic
    embrace.

    Our lips
    unite and
    delight in
    lover's taste.

    This night
    by chance
    our love
    collides.

    Tomorrow
    I know,
    I will again
    be alone.

    It was only
    a temporary
    pretense
    feeling of
    love.

    As the sun
    awakens this
    night, I'll be
    left with only
    a cherished
    memory.


    ©2003 Sierra Raines
     
  2. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sad ending to such a beautiful poem. Sometimes those ONE NIGHTS are the most memorable though. I felt you!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    these kinda memories leave us in a cold bliss sometime.
     
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    tyte! love the rhythm...
     
  5. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Alize,

    I know it's sad, but it's true. Thanks for saying my poem was beautiful. So glad you feel me on this one!! Nice hearing from you!

    Much peace to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich,

    Oh, Rich, you are soooooo right! Thanks for writing.

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  7. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey j'hiah,

    Thanks for stopping by!! I am glad you liked it!

    My best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    I feel this like a sweet song soothin my soul :)
     
  9. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Triniti,

    Thanks so much for writing!! I m so glad you enjoyed reading it!!

    My best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Hey Sierra
    this flow
    is felted deep
    it is wonderful
    so emotional
    very nice
    Peace
     
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