Quiet Poetry Lounge : Chemistry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by malikai, Mar 24, 2001.

  1. malikai

    malikai New Member MEMBER

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    I say I hate you
    You say you hate me
    But deep down inside we know that we were meant to be
    Make-ups to break-ups are frequent with me and you
    But only time will tell our destiny
    That statement is oh so true
    So what are we to do
    Try and stay away from eachother
    Or be undercover, us be lovers
    Or act like enemies and you can treat me mean
    But if you ask me, we have the greatest love ever seen
    We'll always love eachother because of the things we've been through
    But us gettin' back together will occur because of the chemistry between me and you
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    malikai...

    i think everyone can relate to this piece!
    i know i've been in one of those "can't live
    with him... can't live without him" type
    things! thanks for sharing this...

    & WELCOME HOME poet!! :)

    Peace&Blessings...
    Sunshyne~
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    you'll love many times
    as your love is refined
    to the point that you know
    the word hate will not flow
    when speaking of her beau

    be encouraged ... it's coming

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a footnote to the mind where time take place...tyte write
     
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    Hate can come from hurt that the love did not evolve the way you felt sure it would, especially when you still hold feelings for one another. Deep write.
     
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