Black Poetry : Chemistry 800

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Luver2B, May 11, 2004.

  1. Luver2B

    Luver2B Active Member MEMBER

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    Knocks me up inside
    When I know I’ve lied
    Pretending my need for you was weak

    Showing just some truth
    Staring into you
    Denying myself your world of sweet

    Shared the physical
    Played with the mental
    We should have been seating at love’s feet

    This half-love is crap
    Should have been denied
    For it kills the only thing that’s neat

    Now we are apart
    Hope we see the light
    Without having need for tinted sheets

    Do know this always
    Never meant to hurt
    Always want to have you near my heat

    Passing through that door
    Hope we both grow more
    While looking for comfort bit by bit

    We will be civil
    Will not be brutal
    We will involve no medical kit

    With me you will die
    That I will not doubt
    Once my needed drug, you’re a sweet hit
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Felt this drop
    flow on now:wink:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No more half stepping, looking to jump in with both feet planted. Nicely put, keep writing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop here i feel ya
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TYTE SCRIBE KEEEEEP EEEEMMMM CCOMMING
     
  6. angelicsage

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    mixing up some concoctions
    of love and forever I see...
    nice flow...keep dropping em
     
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