Black Poetry : CHECKMATE ANALOGY

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Queen for King
    Check mate fool..
    You know u ain't pos to wander far from home..

    One wrong move.. takes me many.. all ways
    2 do things on my own...

    ..pawns everywhere slowly on their way
    cause they know what I protect and wan take it away..

    other players...

    sideways?
    crook'd?
    zig-zag?

    don't really know who to trust..
    just know .. from all ways .. they comin for us..

    want u dead.. cause u king and they want ur spot..
    and they know that ur queen is the best play'a u got!

    (ps... i hope that i didn't write too many.....i don't think so.. i counted so if this is one too many I apologize.. )
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you're good

    it's no more than five on the front page

    you are on fire

    and i wish the Kings would get it together

    to cherish these REAL QUEENS

    that we have
     
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    Enjoyed the creativity of your flow, it certainly can be like that, having to plan your next move anticipating how the playas move around you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this how our lives has been reveal on a chess board when it come to trust
     
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    How did I miss this one!?? For the length of this piece, the power is enormous and beyond the normal scope of realistic understanding. We understand but we don't REALLY understand!!! Excellent and surprising work !!!
     
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    thank you Brother Keita.....
     
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    GO GIRL!!!!

    :eek: MISS LADY
    POET OF THE WEEK FLAVOR
    SERIOUS!!!!!
    CHECK MATE
    You are coming very correct Sis
    FLOW ON!!!!!!:dj:


    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:

    I Absolutely Love this!!!!!!!!:huh:
     
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    I can only :bowdown: :bowdown: to Maat!!!
     
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    Miss Lady, GHURL!!!! You are on FIRE!!!!! This was true and real...CHECKMATE!!!
     
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