Black Poetry : Checkin you out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kente417mojo, Apr 9, 2004.

  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't close them
    my eyes that is
    concentrating endlessly
    daydreaming or your kiss
    could it be as hypnotic as your hips
    didn't noticed I spilled my tea
    before I took the first sip
    Adidas now stained with green tea leaves
    Am I rude to invade your mind as I drift
    around your locks and down your back
    blowing across your neck
    then between your thighs
    Oh......this brain of mine
    gets me in trouble sometimes
    I'm checking you out
    not a word from my mouth
    passes through the air
    to connect with your ears
    rejection may seem to fuel my fears
    like Maxwell said
    "I know you don't need me, I'm know I'm not your style"
    but I'm still checking you out
    heavenly lady, come sit for a while
    and let's make love with the mind
    as body follows behind
    did I say that out loud
    in the myst of this crowd
    ......................busted now
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed the style and flow of this, keep checking her out, maybe she'll check ya back....
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hopefully right???? Thanks for the love Watz. Much love to you as always. :peace:
     
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    that was sweet something like Dead Prez mind sex feelin it big time.
     
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    the craft u bring is awesome this was very very tyte flow
     
  6. kente417mojo

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    Thanks Sensual and Rich always. Thank you for the encouragement and kind words. Glad that you enjoyed. :jumping:
     
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