Black Poetry : Check Yes or No

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  1. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Check Yes or No

    Things were so simple back in the day
    To get your attention I just looked your way
    [email protected], he’s FINE…somebody I gotta know
    Do you like me? Check Yes or No

    Ima put on that sexy perfume when I step out of the bath
    and wear that fly, sexy red dress just in case I cross his path
    But I can’t let him know that I’m feelin’ his flow
    Do you like me? Check Yes or No

    While sitting in class he passes me a note
    Wants to walk me to my next class and carry my books and coat
    Boy you got me all messed up…starting to feel that glow
    Do you like me? Check Yes or No

    He said he would call me as he writes my number down
    I’m peepin’ out his smooth skin…lookin’ all golden brown
    I wonder if he thinks about me. I’d give anything just to know
    Do you like me? Check Yes or No

    He asked me to be his girl and I thought he was so fresh
    Honored to be on his arm everyday it seemed like we just meshed
    Fall and Spring Dance and Homecoming Ball
    Matching shirts, holding hands and kissing in the hall
    Late night phone calls talkin’ dirty after dark
    Sneakin’ and freakin’ making out in the park
    I didn’t know it then but back in the day was the best
    He really did like me ‘cause his answer was yes
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Creatively sweet, a very smooth flow. Wouldn't it be great if all we had to do now was just check yes or no? Those were the days. This was much enjoyed.
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    good for you

    i see he said yes

    i see he ain't stupid

    cause i would have said yes too but it would have been more like


    YES YES YES

    do it again

    lol
     
  4. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sis Watz: ain't that the truth...back in the day things were so simple...lol!
    DSS: LOL! I dont think he said yes with that much emotion...glad you enjoyed the piece!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U took me way back to third & forth grade when the yes and no
    was the answers we all gave it was so cool and simple then
    puppy love and sweetest of friends it was grand back in the day
    but look out today whewwwww!!!
    i enjoyed this had me smiling all the way .....lol
     
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